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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改65

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  考研英语待批改作文:

  Cover Letter

  October 19,2011

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  Having seen your job offer advertised in Chengdu Daily Paper yesterday, I would like to apply for the position and I hope I might be able to interview with your training center.

  I shall be very grateful if you will kindly let me know as soon as possible the prospect of success of my application.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear Sir or Madam, Having seen your job offer advertised in Chengdu Daily Paper yesterday, I would like to apply for the position and I hope I might be able to interview with your training center(这里想要表达什么?). Im a Chemistry teacher at a middle school, (加连词and)I received M.A. degree of Chemical Biology last year. The job described in your newspaper seems suited to my background, and Im confident that I would be able to perform the job to your satisfaction. I have enclosed my resume and I would be most obliged if you would give me the chance to interview your firm. I shall be very grateful if you will kindly let me know as soon as possible the prospect of success of my application. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评:5-6分不知道你应聘的是什么职业,第二段没有介绍太多实质性的内容,而且最后一句的后半句可以去掉。

  

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