I am so excited to hear from the information that you are looking for an English teacher.For the good reputation of your school,I was really eager to join you .
As a graduate from YunNan University who is majoring in English,My previous training and strength actually fall in with the present position .For one thing ,all my college subjects were excellent ,which laid a good foundation for my further work.For another,I have passed the eight professional examination,so I meet the qualifications you offer.Most importantly,to be an English is my ideal and I have confidence in this career.
I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my application .I look forward to hearing from you .
Yours sincerely,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am so excited to hear from the information that you are looking for an English teacher. For the good reputation of your school, I was(am，用现在时) really eager to join you . As a graduate from YunNan(Yunnan) University who is majoring in English, My(my) previous training and strength actually fall in with the present position .For one thing, all my college subjects were excellent , which laid a good foundation for my further work. For another, I have passed the eight professional examination(专八?要写正确), so I meet the qualifications you offer. Most importantly, to be an English(加teacher) is my ideal and I have confidence in this career. I would like to express my gratitude for your kind consideration of my application .I look forward to hearing from you . Yours sincerely, LiMing 点评：7分写的还可以，要注意细节性的问题。第二段表达要简明扼要，可以多谢几个方面，例如经验和性格。但一定要简洁。