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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改47

发布时间:2016-03-01  编辑:查字典英语网小编

  考研英语待批改作文:

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear Sir or Madam, I am an undergraduate student form(from) the university(说明是具体哪所大学). I find your company is looking for an editor about a new book. Then I write this letter and apply for get(介词后用动名词,也可以去掉这个词) this position. I believe I am qualified for it. To begin with, I study this profession and have a long systemic education. What is more, I went to practice in the publication among the(改成介词on) holidays, so I have a multiple of (去掉)experiences in the field of editor. Last but not least is that I have a strong interesting about(改成interest in,这里需要名词) my specialty, then I have confidence to play a good role in the work. So, I would express my appreciation if you could give me an interview. I believe that you will not be disappointed to give me this opportunity. Look forward to your replay. Yours sincerely, Li Ming (落款部分位于右下角) 点评:6-7分写的还可以,语法问题有点多。

  

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