Yours sincerely,
LI Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear sir(Sir) or Madam, I am a senior student from the Department of Chinese language and literature of Lanzhou University. I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position of journalist which you have advertised on your websit(拼写错误). I am sure that I am qualified. Firstly, what I have stydied(拼写错误) in the past four years was highly in accordance with the rules your offerend(拼写错误). Secondly, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a journalist. Thirdly, I has cultivated strong ability of teamwork in school .I know whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and teamwork are nearer to success. Finally, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience . I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details in person the relevance of my educational background, hobbies and working experiences. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, LI Ming(落款部分位于右下角) 点评:7-8分第二段的第三条内容要简化,或者是直接换做work experience,简历最重要的两方面一是学历,而是经历。
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