Yours sincerely,
LI Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear sir(Sir) or Madam, I am a senior student from the Department of Chinese language and literature of Lanzhou University. I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position of journalist which you have advertised on your websit(拼写错误). I am sure that I am qualified. Firstly, what I have stydied(拼写错误) in the past four years was highly in accordance with the rules your offerend(拼写错误). Secondly, my cheerful personality is well suited to working as a journalist. Thirdly, I has cultivated strong ability of teamwork in school .I know whatever difficulty or situation we are confronted with, those who have the spirit of cooperation and teamwork are nearer to success. Finally, enclosed with this letter is my resume, which further details my previous academic qualifications and work experience . I would appreciate it if you could grant me an interview so that I could explain in more details in person the relevance of my educational background, hobbies and working experiences. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, LI Ming(落款部分位于右下角) 点评:7-8分第二段的第三条内容要简化,或者是直接换做work experience,简历最重要的两方面一是学历,而是经历。
十大经典动作电影盘点:每一部都让人热血沸腾
国内英语资讯:China donates emergency relief package to S. Sudan
国内英语资讯:China offers medical supplies for Madagascar to fight plague
贾斯汀•比伯要转型?演唱会取消就要当演员了
国际英语资讯:Vietnams Da Nang completes logistics preparations for APEC week
国际英语资讯:Spotlight: Trump touts health care executive order amid criticism, insurance market jitters
榴莲为什么这么“臭”?未来或可培育无味榴莲
爱彼迎又曝偷拍丑闻,摄像头正对床位!住民宿如何防偷窥
国际英语资讯:Kenyan leader says to consider election amendment before signing
Sector、department、division 三个表示“部门”的单词
以貌取人? 伊朗教育部门禁止丑人当老师!
英国或向脸书、推特征收网络安全税,让社交媒体为网络滥用行为买单
一周热词榜(10.7-13)
你相信魔法吗 Do You Believe In Magic
国际英语资讯:U.S.-led forces transfer IS militants from Raqqa to Deir al-Zour: media
国际英语资讯:Wildfires destroy 3,500 houses in western Californias Santa Rosa: mayor
体坛英语资讯:China, Indonesia to meet in quarterfinals of badminton world junior championship
国际英语资讯:Spotlight: Trump signs executive order to dismantle Obamacare, faces Democratic opposition
体坛英语资讯:Hacken Lee to be charity ambassador of HK Golf Open Charity Cup
十大经典动作电影盘点:每一部都让人热血沸腾[1]
京东和阿里巴巴恶战打响!奢侈品之争谁能赢?
国际英语资讯:Prospect of Brexit continues to mute British services sector: business group
雪诺与女野人订婚戒曝光,愚人节玩笑太吓人!
国际英语资讯:Californian governor to visit wildfires-hit areas as death toll climbs to new high
黑人秒变白人?多芬沐浴露典型是在搞事情!
国际英语资讯:Plane carrying 10 crashes in Cote dIvoire
体坛英语资讯:Peru hopeful of ending 36-year World Cup drought
水逆,到底逆什么?老外是这样说的...
国际英语资讯:Political stalemate in Kenya enters defining moment
爱彼迎又曝偷拍丑闻,摄像头正对床位!住民宿如何防偷窥