I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a translator. I should be grateful of you would consider me favorably as a candidate for the position.
I graduated with a Masters degree in Fudan University in 2009. And then I worked as a translator for a foreign company in Shanghai for 2 years. This year, my family transfer to Beijing, so I want to find a new job in this city. The position your company provide is important to me. Im familiar with the translating work, and I have the national certificate of translating. Last year I handled the whole task that inviting the clients from USA of my company to enjoy the Shanghai Expo.
I shall be pleased to furnish you withing further information concerning my education and work experience. I am available for an interview any moment. My telephone number is: 666-666.
Looking forward to receiving your favorable reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a translator. I should be grateful of you would consider me favorably as a candidate for the position. I graduated with a Masters degree in Fudan University in 2009. And then I worked as a translator for a foreign company in Shanghai for 2 years. This year, my family transfer(应该用过去时) to Beijing, so I want to find a new job in this city. The position your company provide is important to me. Im familiar with the translating work, and I have the national certificate of translating. Last year I handled the whole task that inviting the clients from USA of my company to enjoy the Shanghai Expo(最好不要用简写). I shall be pleased to furnish you withing(with?) further information concerning my education and work experience. I am available for an interview any moment. My telephone number is: 666-666. Looking forward to receiving your favorable reply.(这一句话可以并在最后一段) 【Yours sincerely, Li Ming】(落款部分写在右下角) 点评：8-9分写的很不错。最后一段适当简练一些。