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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改31

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  Sincerely,

  Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear Sir or Madam,

  Im a graduate student from Zhejiang Sci-Tech University. Through the newspeper(拼写错误), I got a(如果要用不定冠词,要用an,建议使用定冠词the) imformation(拼写错误) which you firm needs several desingers(拼写错误). I really hope to be employed by you. There are some reasons to indicate this job conform(这里不能用动词原形,如果是indicate后省略宾语从句的that,conform应该用第三人称单数,如果不是从句,双宾语应该用动名词形式)to me. To begin with, I like designing and study(这里应该用完成时I have studied) painting for ten years, so this position does fall in with my former preparation. In addition, my work awarded(应该用被动语态,改为was awarded by/in) two designing competition last year, I believe I have the ability which you demand for this job. I wish to recive(拼写错误) you(这里应该用所有格形式your) reply soon. Thank you for your time and consideration. 【Sincerely,(这里一般用Yours sincerely,) Li Ming】(落款部分写在文章的右下方) 点评:5-6分首先是拼写错误有点多,而且是一些常见词。然后需要注意细节上的问题。第二段如果简单加一条你的personality会更好。

  

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