I am an undergraduate from the department of law of Tanjin University. I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position of legal adviser which you have advertised in the local business newspaper.
Thank you for your consideration for my application. If you have any questions please feel free to call me at any time, my telephone number is 8293655. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am an undergraduate from the department of law of Tanjin(Tianjin) University. I am writing this letter for the purpose of applying for the position of legal adviser which you have advertised in the local business newspaper. As a young man whose primary interest is in law knowledge, I am sure that I meet the qualifications you specified in your advertisement. I had been taking part in a temporary job in a law firm at leisure time. Meanwhile, I passed the national judicial examination and obtained lawyer qualification certificate in(去掉) this year. Therefore I have attained a fair knowledge and experience in this filed. Thank you for your consideration for my application. If you have any questions please feel free to call me at any time, my telephone number is 8293655. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 点评：8-9分写的很好，几乎没有错误，思路、格式也没有问题，争取向满分作文冲刺!