I am responding to your ad in the October 10,2011,the Sunday issue of the China Daily ,for the position of the editor.It prompts me to offer you my qualifications because your requirements closely parallel my qualification and working experience.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional imformation you require,please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
Yours faithfully,
LiMing
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam:(英文信件中,这里用逗号) I am responding to your ad in the October 10,2011,the Sunday issue of the China Daily(这一部分比较乱) ,for the position of the editor. It prompts me to offer you my qualifications because your requirements closely parallel my qualification and working experience. I will be graduating(改成graduate,前边有will) from Graduate School of Tsinghua University this year with a master degree. I once worked as a graphic designer in a newspaper office for 2 years as a part-job(part-time job). And I have got some editing experiences in CCTV.I feel that I am competent to meet the requirements which you based on the advertisement. I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional imformation(拼写错误)you require, please contact me. I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview. 【Yours faithfully, LiMing】(落款部分位于右下方) 点评:6-7分写的还是不错的,注意这几个细节和格式上的错误。
体坛英语资讯:LA Galaxy near deal for former Boca Juniors boss Barros Schelotto
Classic Cartoons 经典卡通
The Things I Own 我拥有的东西
国际英语资讯:UN debates impact of climate change, urges action
国际英语资讯:Spotlight: Hosting Africa Cup of Nations likely to revive football, tourism sectors in Egypt
为什么用外语撒谎更容易?科学家是这么说的……
国内英语资讯:Chinese premier pledges to promote ties with Cambodia to new high
苏格兰酒店为迎中国游客出奇招 全球各国将迎来“春节时间”
国际英语资讯:Germany, France sign treaty to renew friendship and cooperation
春节最受期待的大片之一!还惊动了外媒报道
可口可乐和百事可乐到底有什么区别?
国内英语资讯:China confident, capable of keeping economic growth within appropriate range in 2019: premie
国际英语资讯:Death toll from Paris bakery blast rises to three
国际英语资讯:Indonesia keen to accelerate plans to produce electric vehicles: official
国际英语资讯:Israeli army artillery strikes on northern Gaza suburbs, no injuries reported
日本女生嫌弃相亲对象穿优衣库,网友吵起来了
国际英语资讯:Zeman hopes B&R initiative will help boost Czech development
国际英语资讯:Israel, U.S. successfully test Arrow-3 missile defense system
国际英语资讯:Syrian air defenses intercept Israeli missiles targeting Damascus: army
体坛英语资讯:2022 Hangzhou Asian Games releases marketing program
国际英语资讯:Feature: Chinese-made motorbikes earn Kenyans in formal jobs extra income
国内英语资讯:A day in the life: survey released on habits of typical Chinese person
《唐顿庄园》制作人准备导演新剧!又是一部神剧?
国际英语资讯:Lebanon says ready to host Arab summit in Beirut
国际英语资讯:Moscow urges Washington to drop plans of placing weapons in outer space
国内英语资讯:Opening of Chinas market could serve as future global growth driver: experts
国际英语资讯:Portuguese parliament approves extension of gold visa scheme
国内英语资讯:CPC meeting reviews work report, Party regulations
国内英语资讯:President Xi congratulates launch of China-Laos Tourism Year 2019
国内英语资讯:China Development Bank reports total assets of 16.2 trln yuan