Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下：
Dear Sir or Madam:(英语中用逗号) I am writing to apply for the position of accounting due to the information you published on the newspaper. As a young man whose primary interest is in accounting, I am eager to work in a company as an accountant. First , I have a outstanding skills in accounting .As a undergraduate student of Xiamen University ,I have passed five courses of ACCA, which shows my professional ability. Besides, I have woked(拼写错误) in a company as an assistant of an accountant(可以直接说accounting assistant), so I am very familiar with the job . I think ,this job is fall in with my previous preparation. The record of my formal schooling and rewards are sent as a cover letter . I would be very grateful if I could have the chance to have an interview .Thanks for your time and consideration. 【 Yours sincerely(加逗号) Li Ming 】(这一部分都要位于右下角) 点评：8分写的不错，注意一下格式，不要在格式上丢分。