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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改15

发布时间:2016-03-01  编辑:查字典英语网小编

  考研英语待批改作文:

  Dear Sir or Madam:

  Your sincerely

  Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear Sir or Madam: I have got the message from internet(i大写)which says your company needs a biologist. I wrote This(t小写)letter to ask would I have the opportunity to have this job. I have graduated from GZ(不建议使用缩写)University for two years, and I have got Yales P.D(不建议使用缩写) one month ago. All the above make me have the knowledge to cope this job. I worked as an experiment assistant for two years,(加连词and) therefore I have the ability of use biological apparatus. If I am possible to get this job please contact me, my email address is XXX@yahoo.com. Thank you for your time. Your(Yours)sincerely(加逗号) Li Ming 点评:6-7分写的还可以的,注意一下大小写和信件的格式。考试和简历中为了表示诚意,不建议使用缩写。

  

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