I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of manager assistant you have advertised in the internet. Enclosed with this letter is my resume which further details my qualification and previous work experience.
I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your company. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to recommend myself as a qualified candidate for the job of manager assistant you have advertised in the internet(on the Internet,注意Internet首字母大写). Enclosed with this letter is my resume which further details my qualification and previous work experience. Not only my personality is well suited working(这里应该用to do 的形式) as a manager assistant, but my strong professional spirit and outstanding skills at English listening and speaking which are the necessary conditions for daily communication in a foreign company as yours. I would like to meet with you at your earliest convenience, to discuss the possibility of working at your company.(建议将这一句话去掉,I look forward to meeting you in the near future.有后边的这句话就够了) Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to meeting you in the near future. Yours sincerely, Li Ming(这一部分放在右下角) 点评:5-6分第二段稍显不充分,可以再加一两句话。
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