Yours truly,(格式右下角左对齐)
Li Ming
老师辛苦您了,这是我备战考研第一次写作文....不会写太痛苦了,请教老师一个问题,考研作文老师没有偏好齐头式或者空两行的格式吧,再次感谢老师,老师我加上那几个字,署名才能在右下角,要不格式就不对了,我怎么都弄不好,只能弄成那样了
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to recommend myself as an editor of your magazine Economist which advertised in the newspaper two months ago(时间太长,两个月之前的招聘广告很有可能已经过期). I do wish to have the opportunity of having worked(这里不用完成时,改成working) with you and your colleagues. As a young man whose majority(这个词是大多数的意思,改成major) is in(去掉) News, I find my personally ability is well fit this job. After my graduate from Beijing University I worked for a finance company,(加连词and) during the two years I acquired much knowledge of economy. With the capability of writing I think I could be the right person of the position needed by you. I really wish to have an interview form(from) you. You could call me at 98765 in your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours truly,(格式右下角左对齐) Li(不用空格) Ming 点评:6分第二段的内容,去掉第一句的客套话后实际内容很少,可以把你的学历和经验分开写。另外可以写一写你的personality等内容。
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