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考研英语复习资料考研英语作文范文的批改7

发布时间:2016-03-01  编辑:查字典英语网小编

  I have read your advertisment in the nespaper for a staff member,and should be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for this position. I am sure that I am qualified for it.First,my major is coincide with the jobs requirement.Second,my cheerful personality is well suited to having a job like this.My hobbies include sports and music,and I can play erhu. I would be appreciate if you could grant me an interview so that I could show you the detail in person about my background and training.I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Sincerely, Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear sir or Madam, I have read your advertisment(拼写错误advertisement) in the nespaper(拼写错误newspaper) for a staff member, and(加主语I)should(应该用would) be grateful if you could consider me favorably as an applicant for this position. I am sure that I am qualified for it. First, my major is coincide with the jobs requirement. Second, my cheerful personality is well suited to having a job like this. My hobbies include sports and music, and I can play erhu. I would be appreciate(应该用形容词appreciated) if you could grant me an interview so that I could show you the detail in person about my background and training. I am looking forward to your favorable reply at your earliest convenience. Sincerely(一般用Yours sincerely), Li Ming 点评:6分

  第二段的内容不够充实。最好第一段写出招聘的具体职位,第二段更加有针对的推销你自己。

  

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