Yours sincerely
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam, Your advertisement for a staff member in May 10,China daily interested me,because the position your provide(应该用过去时,因为广告已经刊登) there exactly like the kind of job I am seeking for. Accoring(拼写错误providing)to your advertisement,you need a staff who is highly educated and has some related woking(拼写错误) experience. I think I meet the requirements above. I graduated form(拼写错误) ShangHai(h不用大写) University with a(m的发音是以元音开头,所以要用an) M.S.degree(最好不要用缩写). And I had worked in a relevent(拼写错误,relevant)company before. (这里可以再补充以下你有经验)Whats more, I had passed CET-6, and I can communicate with the native speaker(建议用复数) freely in English. I am a very friendly person who can quickly built friendship with others of all ages. Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely(要有逗号) Li Ming(落款部分写在右下角) 点评:6-7分拼写错误有点多,另外一些格式上的规则要注意。第二段的第一条内容简化一下。
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