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2014考研英语小作文范文赏析道歉信

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  考研英语待批改作文:

  第一篇

  Dear David,

  I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.

  The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.

  Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear David,

  I am truly sorry that I cannot attend the project meeting to be held on next Tuesday afternoon.

  The reason is that I am going to take a business to Shanghai by plane that day, so I will be unavailable for the meeting. However, considering the importance of the meeting, I will be grateful if you could send me a brief record of the project progress by E-mail. I will check the record and send my feedback to you.

  Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.

  Yours sincerely,

  Li Ming

  8分

  同学你好,你的作文写的不错。但是要注意if从句的主将从现。

  Dear Prof.Wong,

  I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.

  To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

  I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

  Sincerely yours,

  LiMing

  考研英语作文批改点评如下:

  Dear Prof.Wong,

  I am deeply sorry to inform you that I did not manage to complete the task you designated last week, due to a sudden illness falling upon me these days. For the last week, I have been in a hospital with a continuous fever, which has prevented me from any activity.

  To make up my fault, could you please extend my deadline to next Friday? If so, I promise I will finish the task and send my report to you via email.

  I do apologize again for any inconvenience it might bring to you, and hope you could accept my apology.

  Sincerely yours,

  LiMing

  8分

  同学你好,作文写的很好,但要注意时态的选择。这是过去发生的事,因此要用过去时。

  

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