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考研英语作文批改范例4

发布时间：2016-03-01 编辑：查字典英语网小编

　　To whom It（it 不用大写） may concern, 　　As a gold-collar worker who is living in a good environment, and （删掉）I am writing in the hope of your assistance to find a drop-out girl for whom I may provide financial support. 　　I am hoping（hope） that the candidate is a girl from the less developed rural aeras of Western China .Whats more, the girl drop（主谓一致） out of school for the lack of money. In addition, she must be willing to return to his hometown to help built it after graduation from university. 　　I plan to offer 3000 yuan per year to pay for her tuition fee and other school expenses until she graduates from university and hunts for a decent job. 　　Thank you for your time ! 　　Yours sincerely, 　　Li Ming

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