考研英语写作,总分30分,占考研英语分值比重较大,同时也是提高英语分数可能性最大的单项。查字典英语网就特别为考生精心挑选了几位同学的实战演练作文进行批改,重点列举了众多考生具有代表性的作文常犯错误,希望能让考生在备考中规避常犯错误,洞悉高分秘决,精准确知分数都丢在哪里?
评语:
本篇作文较好地完成了试题规定的任务,结构明晰;并且使用了较丰富的语法结构和词汇,言语基本准确,在使用较复杂的结构或较高级的词汇时出现了错误;采用了适当的衔接手段,组织较严密,格式和语域较恰当,对读者产生了预期的目标。
但同时也有问题存在:
首先,首句表达与主题的密切度不是很大。你是在表述题目要求的后面部分,而这一部分并非题目要求书写的主题。这样很容易让阅卷老师形成假象,误以为你的主题是讲述爱的不同感觉。
其次,词语搭配的准确性有点欠缺,见以上批注。
建议:
以后在复习中多接触历年考研人的高分作文,多积累,多总结。建议参阅王江涛老师的《高分写作》。每个必考话题都进行仿写练习。
相信经过多次练习后,写作水平还会有很大提高~~ 加油~~
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