考研英语待批改作文:
5-7分
第一篇
Dear Kate,
There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.
Campus English Corner
October 22, 2012
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Kate,
There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th.
(加Sincerely yours,) Campus English Corner
October 22, 2012(删除)
5分
同学你好,考研小作文的字数要求是100词左右,你的作文虽然没有大问题,但是包含的内容太少,句型变换等也太少了。另外,要注意书信的格式。
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