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Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of Chinas industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that I have been invested to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold by the world economic organization as academic critics during October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again, I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Jone,
I am truly sorry that I will not be able to participate in your academic activity about the economy of Chinas industry organized by Shan Dong University.
The reason is that{I have been invested(用词不当)to take part in the Economic Exhibition hold(改为held) by the world economic organization as academic critics} during(改为from) October to December. And I will leave at tomorrow morning, so I think I can not participate in your activity. Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused. Hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
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同学你好,表达能力需要提高,这篇作文中有词汇使用以及语法结构的错误,导致我不能理解你要表达的意思。建议你多背一些满分作文,积累一些好的句型、词组。
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