考研英语待批改作文:
8-10分
第二篇
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.
I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a freshman of this college. I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about the service rendered in our flat apartments.
The reason for my dissatisfaction is that there is still lacking necessary amenities for our daliy(拼写错误,改为daily) life. In the first place, just taking a warm shower still seems to be impossible as the weather gets colder than before. In addition, even scarcely can hot drinking water be provided continously. Under the circumstances, I find it dismal to go on with everything in the following day and night.
I appreciate it very much if you could pay prompt attention to the problems, preferably solve all of them as soon as possible, and I would like to have this matter settled by this winter around the corner.
Thank you for your consideration and I will be looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
8分
考研小作文的字数要求是100词,不要超过太多,考试时间很紧张,把过多的时间用在写小作文上是不合理的。作文写的不错,但要再细心一点,尽量避免单词拼写错误。
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