考研英语待批改作文:
5-7分
第一篇
Dear sir,
I just read an advertisement in the newspaper about the recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I am a recent graduate of Northwest University with a doctor degree in Computer Science. I understand how to be a successful software engineer. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an assistant software engineer at Northwest University for two months.
I would be happy to meet you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thansfor your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
考研英语作文批改点评如下:
Dear sir,(s大写)
I just read an advertisement in the newspaper about the recruitment information. I would like to apply for a position as a software engineer.
I am a recent graduate of Northwest University with a doctor degree in Computer Science. I understand how to be a successful software engineer. My professional skills, as described in the enclosed resume, are well suited to your requirement. In addition to having taken a broad range of courses, I served as an assistant software engineer at Northwest University for two months.
I would be happy to meet you at your convenience and discuss how my education and experience match. Thansfor(改为Thank you for) your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
7分
同学你好,标点符号与后面的单词空一格。你的作文写的很不错,就是要再细心一点。
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