8-10分
第一篇
Dear Dr.Wang,
There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear Dr.Wang,
There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
9分
同学你好,作文写的很好 ,没有语法错误,但是内容要是再丰富一些会更好。
第二篇
Dear Xiaoqiang,
There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at five Oclock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven Oclock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2012.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
Dear Xiaoqiang,
There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2013. We would be honored to have you there with us.
The occasion will start at five Oclock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven Oclock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it.
I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2012.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
10分
同学你好,作文写的非常不错,继续保持!
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