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2015考研英语作文范文名师批改（十）

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　考研英语作文热门话题范文：堵车现象

　　As is indicated in the cartoon above,a big crowded of drivers stay in cars on the road,waiting for their turn to go,with patience almost running up.In fact ,nowadays,this phenomenon reflected by the picture is so widespread,especially in supercities.Thanks to the fast development of economy,we have a chance to experience the more richer life.As a result of that,the number of people who own cars is larger and larger.The once wide roads become narrow .In order to get to destinationon time,people have to set up earlier in case of being blocked.By the way ,discharging too much carbon-dioxide to the air would destroy the environment.Therefore,it is imperative for us to take measures to change the fact.The simplest method is to diminish the times of using private transportations.There is no doubt the world would change into a better place for us to live benefited from all the efforts we devote.

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　　文章中存在一些细节问题，比如词汇的选择和一些基础的语法知识。作者在写作完之后若可以花费几分钟时间来回读文章，便会减少此类问题，从而避免失分。同时，建议结合《写作160篇》的指导，认真复习，积累经典句型，避免汉语式英语的表达，不断提高自己的写作水平。

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