【高分范文】
Just as what is shown in the picture, a girl is asking a question online. Answers from different netizens differ so greatly that the girl is very confused about whom she should follow①. It is obvious that it is becoming a fashion for people to ask questions online when confronting a dilemma。
The implication implicit in the drawing can be elaborated as follows. On the one hand, the Internet has provided us with great convenience. For example, we can get knowledge about nearly all aspects on the Internet with only several keyboard commands and a few clicks of the mouse through search engines such as Baidu and so on. On the other hand, with an explosive amount of information on the Internet②, it can be difficult to tell good information from bad③. For example, teenagers and adolescents may mistake the bad information online as good, the result of which can be rather devastating. Some dirty information on the net may exert negative impacts on people。
In conclusion, on the one hand, it is important for us to take full advantage of Internet to enhance our efficiency and save our time. On the other hand, effective steps should be taken to educate people to avoid and elude inappropriate and even wrong data online so as not to be misguided. Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work④。
【佳作妙译】
如图所示,图片中一个女孩正在网上问一个问题,来自于网友的答案差异太大了,以至于女孩很困惑到底该听谁的。很明显,人们面临困境的时候上网提问的现象已经成为一种时尚。
这幅图所隐含的意义可以阐释如下。一方面,因特网为我们提供了很大便利。例如,通过百度等搜索引擎键入一些命令、点击几下鼠标,我们就可以获得几乎各个领域的知识。另一方面,由于因特网上有海量的信息,很难区分好的信息和坏的信息。例如青少年可能会把错误的信息误认为是正确的,其结果是非常具有毁灭性的。网上的一些不健康信息也可能会给人们带来负面影响。
总之,一方面,充分利用因特网来提高效率,节约时间,这很重要。另一方面,应该采取有效的措施教育人们去排除网上不合适的甚至错误的数据,以免被误导。只有这样,网络才能更好地为我们的生活、学习和工作服务。
【名师点评】
① so that 句型:如此以至于
② with an explosive amount of information on the Internet: 这是2004年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。
③ it can be difficult to tell good information from bad: 这是2003年真题阅读第一篇中的句型。可见,充分了解真题阅读,对于提高写作的帮助作用也很大。
④ Only in this way can the net better serve for our life, study and work:倒装句。
倒装句的写法:
原句:The net can better serve for our life, study and work only in this way.
only放在句首,把情态动词can和主语交换一下位置就写成了倒装句。
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