这篇作文条理清晰,语言通顺,值得推荐,尤其是过渡句的运用。
Personal responsibility and social environment
The concept of responsibility is a necessary fiction. Although socities must hold their individuals accountable for their own actions, peoples behavior is largely determined by forces not of their own making.
In the title statement, the speaker holds the contention that the concept of individual responsibility is no existence but a fiction. Moreover, the speaker says that the behaviors of human beings are fundamentally determined by the environment which out of their control. Admittedly, ones actions are deeply influenced by laws, societies, schools and families and other exterior forces; individual responsibility exists and functions as a significant role to rule peoples behaviors as well.On one hand, the highest social animal as human being is, any individual has his specific role in a certain society. And this specific role gives one social identity and individual responsibility through education in schools and influence of ethical and moral standards. Though some times one would feel that the certain responsibility is obligation from the society and organizations rather than his individual responsibility at first, in most cases, the accountability would presumably become ones own eventually followed by the final identification of his specific social identity, and then direct ones behaviors without the force from the exterior world. For example, a soldier would think it is his duty to obey the rules without any hesitation; a surgeon would consider healing the patients as his accountability; and a historian would feel it is his responsibility to discover what is behind the historical descriptions. In fact, different careers and roles form diverse individual responsibilities, which result in individualsvoluntary behaviors.
On the other hand, there are not only specific individual responsibilities in diverse areas but also some fundamental values and accountabilities, which we all human beings cherish. From the moment one can speak or even is born, the society begins to instill the moral and ethical standards, which is so called humanity in every ones mind. The older one is, the deeper influence the humanity would be. When one is just a little child, he would go directly to what he like and claim it. Then when he is old enough, he would realize that it is incorrect and ashamed. And because of the awareness of what is right and wrong, one would probably never do any misdeed again. Actually, humanity is just the common individual responsibility shared by all of us.
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2017届高考英语一轮总复习精选单元练习人教版选修6《Unit 2 Poems》
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2017届高考英语一轮总复习精选单元练习人教版必修2《Unit 4 Wildlife protection》
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2017届高考英语一轮总复习精选单元练习人教版必修2《Unit 5 Music》
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