The World Expo in 2014英文作文
The World Expo in 2014
Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ur government
has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai.
How To Be A Lovely Citizen
Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline below:
1)近几年大学校园内出现考证热
2)产生这一现象的原因
3)你的看法
Certificate Craze On Campus
行文思路
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈我对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。
根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的考证热分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述我对大学生考证热的看法。
高分范文
Certificate Craze On Campus
In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, quite possibly, you may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. Why does this craze appear?
There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.
From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates, since certificates do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability but not getting a certificate of no practical value.
【亮点点评】
祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为随意地，随机地。
限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更严谨，增强了说服力。
that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。
设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。
强调句型，此处是强调主语。
which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。
用于引出我的观点。
当谈到或提及时。
since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为既然。
只是，仅仅。而不是。