四级复习资料的大全：写作(6)

　　1)先行词与代词在数上不一致

　　例如： Were going to face a lot of difficulties, but I believe well overcome it.

　　先行词difficulties是复数，后半句overcome的宾语是difficulties，应该用复数them来指代。

　　Were going to face a lot of difficulties, but I believe well overcome them.

　　2) 代词指代不清

　　代词指代不清是指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清，或前后使用的代词不一致。

　　例如：Mary was friendly to my my sister becarse she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.

　　读完这句话，读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘谁将结婚，谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词所指的对象加以明确，意思就一目了然了。

　　Mary was friendly to my my sister becarse she wanted my sisterto be her bridesmaid.

　　3) 随意更换代词

　　一篇文章中不能出现太多的人称代词。很多学生在写作文时，随着思路的转换，不断更换文章中的代词，一会用第一人称，一会用第二人称或第三人称，这样容易造成逻辑意义上的混乱。

　　例如：And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.

　　人称代词we和反身代词yourself前后不一致。

　　We can also know the society by serving it ourselves