students visit Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities in China. In the place far away from the capital city, the local students also visit the universities famous in their own province.
So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for the students to visit the famous university campus in that it can enable the middle students to get more information about the university and they can have enough time and opportunity to prepare themselves with the chance to get into the university. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the public tourism will have negative effect on the universities because it will not only do harm to the environment but also to the intellectual atmosphere.
In my opinion, the tourism to the universities is not a good thing. The campus is mainly a place for study. With the increasing tourism on the campus, it will ruin the spiritual atmosphere in this learning field.
首先,提纯范文 谋篇布局及结构模板。
第一段:提出问题或现象。Nowadays, have become one of the popular . It has been shown on TV and on the radio that
第二段:正反列举人们的看法。So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to ? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing for in that On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, will have negative effect on because it will not only do harm to but also to
第三段:摆明自己观点。In my opinion, is not a good thing. With the increasing , it will ruin
其次,提纯范文段落写作。
段落写作分为统一性,连贯性和完整性三方面。
统一性(unity):段落开头的主题句应该做到不可太宽泛,也不可太具体,做到有较强的概括性才能使下文做到有的放矢的展开。范文第二段首句以设问的方式提出一个问题is it a good or bad thing就有很强的概况性。下文自然会一方面从好的方面说明,另一方面从坏的方面说明。
连贯性(coherence):关联词是使文章段落之间相互连贯的必要条件。范文中nowadays, on one hand, on the other hand, in ones opinion即以启承转合递进的顺序是文章条理清晰,层层展开。
完整性(completeness):以设问句So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to open the university campus for tourists?开头,这是平时较少运用的段落写作方式设问法。On one hand . On the other hand, .是段落写作分类列举法的?文句子写作。
1. It has been shown that
类似句型:It is known to us that
It is said that
It is reported that
It is controversial that
2. Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities 。并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。
3. enable v. 使能够
I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.
4. in that = because
表因为的连词还有since, for, as,如:
The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.
此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:
Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。
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