1)先行词与代词在数上不一致
例如: Were going to face a lot of difficulties, but I believe well overcome it.
先行词difficulties是复数,后半句overcome的宾语是difficulties,应该用复数them来指代。
Were going to face a lot of difficulties, but I believe well overcome them.
2) 代词指代不清
代词指代不清是指代词与被指代的人或物关系不清,或前后使用的代词不一致。
例如:Mary was friendly to my my sister becarse she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
读完这句话,读者无法明确地判断两位姑娘谁将结婚,谁将当伴娘。如果我们把易于引起误解的代词所指的对象加以明确,意思就一目了然了。
Mary was friendly to my my sister becarse she wanted my sisterto be her bridesmaid.
3) 随意更换代词
一篇文章中不能出现太多的人称代词。很多学生在写作文时,随着思路的转换,不断更换文章中的代词,一会用第一人称,一会用第二人称或第三人称,这样容易造成逻辑意义上的混乱。
例如:And we can also know the society by serving it yourself.
人称代词we和反身代词yourself前后不一致。
We can also know the society by serving it ourselves
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