否定段的主题句:① However , there are some disadvantages of owing a private car/ Every coin has two sides.
② While enjoying the convenience that private cars bring us, we should not ignore the problem they create/ produce/ introduce/ make.
③ Despite/ In spite of/ For all the advantages, they brings their own disadvantages/ problems/ negative effects
④ Like anything else, private cars also have their own weakness/ limits.
⑤ However, private cars are not without shortcomings/ faults.
⑥ Yet other speak of the problems private cars have brought. They complain that......
⑦ However, private cars may also bring with it problems our society had not previously faced.
⑧ Despite the increase in efficiency and convenience generated by private cars, the changes they bring could very well lead to potentially adverse consequences.
否定段的分论点:
① 占有空间 On the one hand, private cars take up/ occupy too much space.
② 交通事故 On the other hand, a driver should be careful/ cautious while driving, otherwise, car accidents are more likely to happen.
③ 污染环境 Whats more/In addition, private cars give off/ discharge/ release CO which pollute the environment/ air.
注意:所谓上义词是指抽象、概括和笼统的,就是比较superordinate的词;而下义词就是具体的东西,即subordinate的东西。
第四段的写法:
① Despite all the disadvantages mentioned above, I still think that the advantages outweigh/ are greater than the disadvantages. As for the above problem, Im sure they will be settled by the scientists in the future/ It is only a matter of time for the problems to be solved.
② Unquestionably, the challenge of private cars means we all should consider how we can control them, so that they will not control us.
③ Whether the private cars are a blessing or a curse is a difficult question to answer, yet the desire for the comfort and independence a private car can bring will not be elminated.
④ Anyway/ Anyhow/ In any case, whether the effect is good or bad, one thing is certain: private cars have changed and will continue to change the way of our transportation, our leisure and our life.
选择题型变体逻辑结构
选择性观点的变体的文章写作逻辑结构:
Paragraph I:引出将要评论的事物或者是观点; 简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
Paragraph II:提出作者观点;
举例加以论证。
Paragraph III:总结全文
范文17. My View on Fate
There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of fate. Some people believe that everyone is born to a certain that he can not change, while some other people think that every man is the master of his own life.
注:1. consensus 相同意见
2. 第一句话可以套用,如范文18:There is no consensus of opinions among people as to the view of wealth.
3. while 轻微转折和对比,强转折用词but, however 4. master 主人
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion. There is a saying, Everyone is the architect of his own future. Which means ones fate is decided in his own hands. In fact, no one is destined to a certain fate in his or her life. Those who claim that they were born to fail or be unlucky just cant realize how much inner strength and ability they have. We must depend on ourselves to changes our lives and make us successful and happy.
注:1. 第一句as far as与I agree重复,把后半句改为the latter opinion seems more reasonable。
2. architect 建筑师,archor 弓箭手
3. In fact 前后是转折关系,之前从正面阐述,之后从反面阐述
范文17. My View on Fate
Lets take Helen Keller, an extraordinary American woman, for example. When she was only 19 months old, she became blind and deaf. Instead of accepting her misfortune helplessly, she showed great courage and unconquerable spirit in fighting against her destined fate and was awarded the Presidents Medal of Freedom in 1964 because of the achievements she had made for helping the blind, the deaf and the speechless. This story tells us that a wise man is always creating his own fate rather than waiting for good luck.
注:1. 本段开始举例
2. Lets takefor example 中间是插入语,表示强调,举例不宜太长。
In conclusion, I believe that everyone is born equal and is the builder of his own fate We can have good fortune only if we take pains and work hard. We should bear the following saying in mind, Every man is the master of his own fate.
注:bear sth. in mind:把牢记在心
范文13. The Way to Success
第二段:Strong will, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of strong will and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in ones work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything.
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