Dear Mr. President,
This letter comes to you from one of your students.In it, some opinions are put forward for you to reflect upon.
As you know, our students are the main customers of the university canteen. But unfortunately, we dont find the service there satisfying sometimes.The food is not as nutritious as it should be. As a result, some of us become thinner and weaker at university.Besides, sometimes the canteen people just bring us steamed bread with their dirty bare hands.And whats more, the fare is also a little higher at university.
Some people may argue that measures have been taken and things are improving there.For instance, Ic cards have taken the place of money in the canteed, and the attitude of the service people is also changing.But in my opinon, progress is not so quick and thorough.
To be belief, though a bit dissatisfied with the present canteen conditions,I do believe that, with the efforts of all people concerned, we can solved the problems there.
Thanks.
Your students,
Li Ming
记叙文题型作文DIY写作步骤
要求考生写一篇记叙文,描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果,最后对事件进行简单分析,如:2003年6月四级作文、2003年9月四级作文、2004年6月六级作文。对这类题型,通常分为三个步骤来写:
第一段、总结描述
交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点:
主题句
第二段、具体描述
具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果
起因+经过+结果
第三段、对事件的分析
分析句1+分析句2+分析3
记叙文题型作文DIY写作范文练习
Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic The Day My Classmate Fell Ill.
1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况;
2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的;
3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是....
架构阶段
第一段:
开篇句:About _____ Oclock one evening in _______, _____.
扩展句:________.
第二段:
主题句:Without hesitation, _____. It wasnt long before _____.
扩展句:1、One ______.
2、Another _______.
3、Our teacher _______.
第三段:
结尾句:Is _______? Who can tell ? But ______.
扩展句:1、When ____ , people showed _____ spirit regardless of ____.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
填充阶段
第一段:
开篇句:About nine Oclock one evening in May, my roommate Li Ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.
扩展句:His head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. His forehead felt very hot. We took his temperature. It was 38.5℃.
第二段:
主题句:Without hesitation, I dialed 120. It wasnt long before an ambulance arrived.
扩展句:1、One roommate brought a blanket for him.
2、Another supported him in the ambulance.
3、Our teacher insisted on giving him some money.
第三段:
结尾句:Is he a suspedted SARS patient? Who can tell ? But we didt retreat.
扩展句:1、When the savage SARS was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.
2、This kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.
3、And it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.
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