原句:
Although the development of science and technology has brought the process to mankind, our surrounding natural environment is greatly destroyed.
改句:
The development of science and technology has brought the process to mankind whileour surrounding natural environment is greatly destroyed.
【解析】
原句是一句典型的转折句,在四六级作文中,although和though的应用相当广泛,那么如何使自己与众不同呢,在此,我为大家推荐一个连词while,这个单词有很多意思,但在改句中,它的意思是虽然、尽管,在考场上用的人相对比较少,所以以后在作文中,如果出现了转折、对比之类的关系句,记住要想到while哦!
下面大家来试试吧!
Existing employees have made concessions, such as higher retirement ages, but it is near impossible to reduce the payments made to existing pensioners.
答案:
While existing employees have made concessions, such as higher retirement ages, it is near impossible to reduce the payments made to existing pensioners.
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