英语书面表达的高分策略
高考英语书面表达题要求的词数不多,只不过百余个词,但却能体现出考生的英语水平。一篇可读性较强的作文一定能体现出作者扎实的语言基本功和驾驭语言的能力。下面以一篇书面表达为例,分三个方面谈谈如何才能做好书面表达题。
原题是:假设你是某中学生英文报的记者,对中学生课外上网的利弊进行调查采访。以下是学生们对上网的看法。请你根据他们的观点写一篇简要的调查报告,并呼吁同学们要正确使用互联网。
使用互联网的益处 使用互联网的弊端
1. 信息资源丰富 1. 内容良莠不齐
2. 节省时间 2. 沉迷网络游戏会影响学业
3. 方便交流和沟通 3. 过多使用会影响健康
一、使用简洁多样的句式
句式多样化是指在一篇文章中要使用不同的句式。它可以使表达灵活多样,使语言增色,有闪光点。句式多样化是获取高分的前提之一。例如在表达上述信息的文章中可以尝试用以下句式或句子结构:
(一)复合句
1. Theres no doubt that the Internet does us good. (句中含同位语从句)
2. The majority of students believe that they benefit a lot from the Internet. (句中含宾语从句)
3. As is known to all, once addicted to the noline games,the students can no longer concentrate on their studies. (句中含定语从句和省略的状语从句)
4. Helpful as the computer is, some still hold the opinion that not everything on the Internet is good for us students. (句中含状语从句和同位语从句)
(二)倒装句
1. Never before could we easily find information with just a click.
2. Only with great care and under proper guidance will the students improve their studies and enjoy making new friends by surfing the Internet.
3. In spite of the increasing popularity and convenience that the Internet brings,by no means can people ignore its bad effects on teenagers.
(三)强调结构
1. It is the Internet that makes the world much smaller.
2. Isnt it the Internet that provides people with a more convenient way of communication?
3. The Internet does enable people to communicate with each other more easily and quickly.
(四)感叹句
1. How hard some students find it to tear themselves away from computer games!
2. How convenient it is to use the computer!
(五)虚拟语气
1. As more and more students stay up surfing the Internet,it is high time that we discussed the problem.
2. Without the Internet,we would not have enjoyed our life so much.
3. Some people insist that teenagers be kept away from the Internet.
(六)非谓语动词
1. We should try to make proper use of the computer,making it a good partner that benefits our life as well as our study.
2. Being absorbed in the games, students may have difficulty in controlling themselves,leaving their homework undone.
3. Some students have their health damaged by burying themselves in the Internet.
此外,还可以尝试使用独立主格结构、 with 复合结构、反意疑问句、并列句、名言警句、被动结构等。清新简洁的文字、灵活多变的语句能使文章的语言更加丰富多彩。
二、用词要准确,要有特色
用词准确是指用词要适时适地,要贴切达意。同时恰当灵活地使用一些较高级的单词和短语,能有效地提高表达的档次,增添文章的色彩。例如在这篇书面表达中同学们可以用到以下较高级的词汇:
do sb good/ harm, have ones health damaged, leave ones homework undone, benefit ( from ) , be addicted to, concentrate on, provide, enable, absorbed in, have difficulty in tearing oneself away from, be kept away from, make proper use of, stay up, have a bad effect on, separate good plants from wild weeds, communicate with, under proper guidance, with the development of computer technology, in spite of the increasing popularity, by surfing the Internet, of great importance 等等。
三、用好过渡性词语
用好过渡性词语可以使整篇表达过渡自然,通顺连贯。在这篇书面表达中同学们可以使用以下的过渡性词语:
whats more, also, besides, in addition; worse still, whats worse, to make things worse; however; therefore, as a result; on the other hand, on the contrary; generally speaking 等。
当然,写出一篇与众不同的好文章非一日之功。考生要打下扎实的英语基础,培养良好的语感,有意识地积累词汇和语言知识,反复进行强化练习,这样才能运用自如,下笔如有神。
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