雅思大作文论点分析：个人国家

　　个人国家

　　有时候，一个现象或问题的出现是由于个人的努力和汗水或个人的疏忽，以及社会国家重视或政府的政策不恰当而导致的。例如：

　　运动员是否应该拿高薪：

　　Athletes sweat and sacrifice physically and psychologically more than the average people, which can justify their high salary.

　　青少年犯罪的原因：

　　Young peoples inexperience and gullibility easily lead then into traps.

　　The government failing to establish supporting system to offer help to adolescents can explain this social issue.

　　在男女平等的意义上使用个人和国家的分析角度也是很有效的：

　　Every woman is worthy to be respected, educated, and safe from exploitation. It is our responsibility and right to pray, promote, and protect the human and divine rights of all. The worlds stability and prosperity depend on it.

　　The full and equal participation of women in all spheres of life is essential to social and economic development, the abolition of war, and the ultimate establishment of a united world.