雅思写作高分范文：children with poverty

　　Children who are brought up in families which have not great amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children are brought up by wealthy parents. Do you agree or disagree?

　　Among the factors that influence a childs development, family financial background is a critical one. Empirically kids from rich families, after entering adulthood, deal with problems differently from those from less well-off households. Generally the latter is more capable of problem-solving.

　　Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals. Rich kids have more toys. If a toy truck gets broken, parents would buy their children another fancier, more expensive one. Rich kids go the best school in the neighborhood. On the contrary, children from an ordinary family have to take good care of their toys. Their parents are often busy with work. So children have chances to make many of their own decisions. Many kids babysit younger brothers or sisters or even take small part-time jobs to help the family. Such differences in the upbringing often tough them for adult life.

　　Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life. For example, they go to a good school only because they have excellent grades, not because daddy donates a building for the school. Hard work and constant trying are the only way to change their life. So they fight to be a winner. But rich kids are so over-protected by their families that they hardly know the harsh world until they leave college and start to work. There are more successful entrepreneurs, actors, doctors, and lawyers from poor families than from rich ones. Poor kids know how to survive in the big wild world better than their rich friends.

　　But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals. Many of them even start businesses independent from their families. But still most of them know more about having fun than about being a good working professional.

　　To sum up, less privileged family background generally enables children to be more responsible and independent. Poor kids value hard work more, handle competition better than rich kids, and cope with problems better after becoming adults.

　　这篇雅思写作范文的写作思路：文章着重讨论贫富不同家庭出身的孩子在成年以后解决问题能力也不同，普通家庭出身的孩子此方面能力更强。

　　态度：同意

　　论点一：Lack of wealth in a family usually helps children to become independent and responsible individuals.

　　论据：对待玩具的不同---more responsible，对待学习的不同-----more independent，帮助家庭工作---more responsible and independent

　　论点二：Children from less affluent families learn about competition early in life.

　　论据：普通人家出身孩子对待改变人生的态度和出身富家孩子的对比

　　让步段论点：But there are cases in which children from rich families have grown up to be very smart, accomplished individuals.

　　结论：总结之前的提到的主要观点

　　总结：这篇文章需要考生会设身处地考虑出身不同的孩子长大后如何用不同的方式态度对待生活中问题。在考试或者练习写作的时候尽量学会使用生活中普通的例子说明支持自己的观点。