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市里召开会议，讨论重修长江大桥一事，市委常委最后将这个项目的决策权交给了吴市长。

The city held a meeting to discuss the reconstruction of the Yangtze River Bridge. The Standing Committee of the municipal Party committee finally handed over the decision-making power of the project to Mayor Wu.

本市的人都知道，这座大桥年久失修，已经出过数次事故，所以人们都盼着能早日修一座放心桥。按说，吴市长手中握着这么大一个项目，那些建筑公司该纷纷上门才对呀，可这几天并不见 有多少人去吴市长家呀！原来吴市长的儿子吴天也有一个建筑公司，大伙都想，这肥水岂能流入外人田，送礼也是白送。

People in this city know that the bridge has been in disrepair for a long time and there have been several accidents, so people are looking forward to building a reassuring bridge as soon as possible. It is said that mayor Wu is holding such a large project in his hand. Those construction companies should come to his house one after another. However, in recent days, not many people go to Mayor Wu's house! It turns out that Wu Tian, Mayor Wu's son, also has a construction company. Everyone thinks, how can this rich water flow into the fields of foreigners? Gifts are also given in vain.

吴市长这几天表面上不露声色，可在内心深处，却是十分焦急，他知道儿子的公司挑不起这个重担，可别的公司不敢毛遂自荐，自己又不了解他们的情况，真是十分为难。

Mayor Wu has been quiet on the surface these days, but in his heart, he is very anxious. He knows that his son's company can't bear the burden, but other companies dare not recommend themselves, and he doesn't understand their situation, which is very difficult.

这天晚上，吴市长正在家里看报，突然有客来访，吴市长认得这个人是天龙建筑公司的总经理，他客气地与吴市长寒暄了一阵，然后直陈自己的来意，希望自己能承建长江大桥这个项目。吴市长陷入了沉思，他对这个天龙公司还是了解的，他们曾经承建了市里的好几个大型工程项目，都保质保量地完成了任务。那个总经理这时从皮包里掏出一个纸包，就悄悄地走了。吴市长从沉思中回来，瞥见了桌上的纸包，打开一看，不禁心头一颤，那一夜，吴市长房里的灯一夜不曾熄……

This evening, Mayor Wu was reading a newspaper at home. Suddenly, a visitor came to visit him. Mayor Wu recognized that he was the general manager of Tianlong construction company. He politely exchanged greetings with Mayor Wu for a while, and then told his intention to build the Yangtze River Bridge. Mayor Wu fell into a deep thought. He still knew about the Tianlong company. They had undertaken several large-scale projects in the city and completed the tasks with quality and quantity guaranteed. The general manager took out a paper bag from his leather bag and left quietly. Mayor Wu came back from his meditation and caught a glimpse of the paper bag on the table. When he opened it, he could not help shaking his heart. That night, the light in the mayor's room stayed up all night

经过投标大会，天龙公司果然揽到了这个项目，他们也没有让全市人民失望，高质量，高速度地完成了任务。

After the bidding conference, Tianlong company really won the project, and they didn't disappoint the people of the whole city. They completed the task with high quality and high speed.

在为大桥落成剪彩的那一天，吴市长和市委市政府的主要领导都亲临现场，在主要领导发表完热情洋溢的讲话后，吴市长走到麦克风前，说道：“今天，大桥竣工了。这是天龙公司努力的结果，我之所以把项目交给天龙，因为他们送给了我一份厚礼呀！“吴市长说完，拿出一个纸包，里面是一叠照片，都是长江大桥以前发生事故时的照片，一张张惨不忍睹。在场的领导无不动容。吴市长的儿子吴天，以前老埋怨爸爸，现在，他终于明白了父亲的一片苦心，一片赤诚之心。

On the day of cutting the ribbon for the completion of the bridge, Mayor Wu and the main leaders of the municipal Party committee and the municipal government came to the scene in person. After the main leaders gave a passionate speech, Mayor Wu went to the microphone and said, "today, the bridge is completed. This is the result of the efforts of Tianlong company. I gave the project to Tianlong because they gave me a great gift! "After mayor Wu finished, he took out a paper bag with a stack of photos, all of which were taken when the Yangtze River Bridge had an accident in the past. They were all horrible. All the leaders present were moved. Wu Tian, Mayor Wu's son, used to complain about his father. Now, he finally understands his father's painstaking and sincere heart.

“现在，请吴市长为大桥揭碑！”吴市长健步走来，奋力一挥，大红幕飘下，“希望长江大桥”六个字迎着太阳闪闪发光……

"Now, Mayor Wu, please unveil the monument for the bridge!" Mayor Wu walked briskly. With a wave of effort, the red curtain fell. The six words "hope Yangtze River Bridge" sparkled in the sun

点评：本文是一篇小小说，虽然篇幅不长，但情节曲折，悬念巧妙。

Comments: This is a small novel, although the length is not long, but the plot twists and turns, suspense clever.

吴市长掌握项目决策权，但无建筑公司上门――为什么？一个波折，一个悬念。

Mayor Wu has the decision-making power of the project, but there is no construction company coming - why? One twists and turns, one suspense.

吴市长的儿子有一家建筑公司！――看似一波已平，悬念已解，实则一波又起，悬念又生――吴市长何去何从？

Mayor Wu's son has a construction company! -- it seems that a wave has been leveled, and the suspense has been solved, but in fact, a wave has risen again, and the suspense has been born again -- where is mayor Wu going?

吴市长不露声色，但内心焦急：儿子不堪重任，他人不敢自荐――情节趋于平缓，继续向前发展。

Mayor Wu is silent, but he is worried: his son can't bear the heavy responsibility, others dare not recommend himself - the plot tends to be smooth, and continues to develop.

天龙公司总经理夜访吴市长，并送来一纸包。――纸包里装的是什么？平地起了波澜，悬念越来越悬。

The general manager of Tianlong company paid a night visit to Mayor Wu and sent a bag. What's in the paper bag? The level ground has been billowing, and the suspense is more and more hanging.

天龙中标――意料之中。但神秘的纸包仍然让人牵肠挂肚。

Tianlong wins the bid -- expected. But the mysterious paper bag is still worrying.

吴市长揭开谜底――纸包里装的是一叠以前长江大桥发生事故的惨不忍睹的照片！

Mayor Wu solved the mystery - the paper bag contained a bunch of ugly photos of the accident of the Yangtze River Bridge!

意料之外！情节达到高潮。

contrary to expectation! The plot climaxes.

短短的篇幅，但故事情节一波三折，而且悬念丛生，让人欲罢不能，实属不易。

It's a short space, but the story is full of twists and turns and suspense. It's hard to stop.

文章的细节描写也很精彩。如“那个总经理这时从皮包里掏出一个纸包……一夜不曾熄……”一段文字，语言精练，表现力强，显示了作者周密的构思和语言的严谨。 以上文章由河南高考语文阅卷评价组成员、郑州一中语文教研组组长魏新磊推荐并点评。

The details of the article are also wonderful. For example, "the general manager then took out a paper bag from the leather bag It doesn't last a night... " A paragraph of writing, concise language, strong expression, shows the author's careful conception and language rigor. The above article is recommended and commented by Wei Xinlei, a member of Henan college entrance examination Chinese marking evaluation group and leader of Zhengzhou No.1 Middle School Chinese teaching and research group.