带着感动出发

因为感动，人生的光辉与色彩才被我们领略；因为感动，生命的律动与力量才会给予我们希望；因为感动，万事万物深层的美好才会被我们碰触,被我们欣赏。那么，带着感动出发吧，用感动充实出一个辉煌的人生。

Because of moving, the brilliance and color of life can be appreciated by us; because of moving, the rhythm and power of life can give us hope; because of moving, the deep beauty of all things can be touched and appreciated by us. Then, let's start with the emotion and enrich a brilliant life with the emotion.

带着感动出发，才会体会那些高尚的情操。在人生绚烂的路途上，我们无比渴望受到高洁气质的熏陶。然而，怀抱一颗充满感动的心，那些美妙高尚的人格才会如花般灿烂地开放在你的眼前，永恒于你的心间。如果不是心怀感动，陶渊明“性本爱丘山”的淡然气质如何让你觉得心旷神怡？如果不是心怀感动，司马迁那“史家之绝唱”如何在你心间激起层层浪花？因为感动，因为带着感动出发，我们在人生的坐标上才不会迷失方向，我们才会被那些高尚的人格引向新的路途。

With moving to start, will experience those noble sentiments. On the gorgeous road of life, we are eager to be edified by noble temperament. However, with a heart full of emotion, those wonderful and noble personalities will bloom in front of your eyes and last forever. If you are not moved, how does Tao Yuanming's indifference of "nature originally loves hills" make you feel relaxed and happy? If you are not moved, how does Sima Qian's "the best of historians" stir up waves in your heart? Because of moving, because with moving, we will not lose our way in the coordinates of life, we will be led to a new way by those noble personality.

带着感动出发，才会看到生命的真谛。珍惜生命、感悟生命并非是人人都能恪守的真理。如果不是把感动放在心间，你如何触摸到生命中最柔软的底层，你又如何理解生命复杂的含义？史铁生虽然双腿残疾，虽然怨恨过痛苦过，但他最终在苍凉的地坛中悟出生命的内涵，这种深刻的领悟来自他内心对生命的感动，来自亲情所带来的刻骨铭心的感动。这感动，让他在破碎的生命旅途中走了那么远，这感动让他对生命充满敬畏，充满慨叹。因为感动，因为带着感动出发，我们才能拥抱生命敞开的灵魂。

With moving, we will see the true meaning of life. Cherish life and realize that life is not the truth that everyone can abide by. If you don't put moving in your heart, how can you touch the softest bottom of life, and how can you understand the complex meaning of life? Although his legs were disabled and he resented the pain, Shi Tiesheng finally realized the connotation of life in the desolate earth altar. This profound understanding came from his inner feelings of life, from the deep feelings of family. This moved him so far in his broken life journey. This moved him to be full of awe and sigh for life. Because of moving, because with moving, we can embrace the open soul of life.

带着感动出发，才能做到坚守原则与坚持不懈。感动让我们内心变得柔软，感动让我们将自己的信念把持得更为坚定。苏武牧羊于瀚海之地，大漠飞沙，我相信是他心中的感动，那出自对国家的大爱的感动引领他向那条荒芜之路上勇敢迈进。还有王昭君：“一去紫台连朔漠，独留青冢向黄昏。”她的勇敢同样来自她那真真切切的感动，遵循于内心的感动，让我们带着感动出发，感动会将信念与坚强深植于土地，连成一片碧绿的辉煌。

With moving, we can stick to the principle and persevere. Moving makes our hearts soft, moving makes us hold our faith more firmly. Su Wu shepherds in the vast sea, the desert sand, I believe it is his heart moved, that from the great love for the country moved him to the road of barren bravely. And Wang Zhaojun: "once you go to Zitai and lianshuo desert, you will only stay in the green tomb to dusk." Her bravery also comes from her real moving, following the inner moving, let's start with moving, moving will deeply plant faith and strength in the land, and become a green brilliance.

艰险与坎坷，我们不怕；风沙与风雪，我们依旧昂首向前。这是因为感动给我们的内心准备了最丰厚的食粮。带着感动出发，让人生的航向永远地朝向美好的远方。带着感动出发，让辛苦而漫长的生活因为感动而充盈着快乐与希望！

We are not afraid of difficulties and frustrations; we are still looking forward to sandstorms and snowstorms. This is because moving prepares the most abundant food for our hearts. With moving start, let the direction of life always towards a better distance. With moving, let the hard and long life be filled with happiness and hope because of moving!

【名师点评】

[comments on famous teachers]

考生将“带着感动出发”放在生命的层面思考，放在人生的高度思考。生命，因为蕴藏感动，更会彰显它的绚烂、尊贵和坚强；人生，因为伴随感动，更会找到方向，阔步向前，充盈着快乐与希望。从这个方面看，考生的理性思维缜密而深刻。文章的选材凸显出两个特点：选材的教材化，譬如陶渊明的“性本爱丘山”、司马迁的“史家之绝唱”、史铁生的“生命达观”、苏武的“牧羊于泽”和王昭君的“独留青冢向黄昏”，既丰富，又深邃；素材的排比式呈现，规避了展开铺叙的俗套，既增加了内容的容量，又强化了求证的力度。(刘德海)

Candidates will "start with emotion" on the level of life thinking, on the height of life thinking. Life, because it contains moving, will show its gorgeous, noble and strong; life, because with moving, will find the direction, stride forward, full of happiness and hope. From this point of view, the candidates' rational thinking is meticulous and profound. The selection of materials in this paper highlights two characteristics: the teaching materials of selection, such as Tao Yuanming's "nature based love hill", Sima Qian's "historian's masterpiece", Shi Tiesheng's "view of life", Su Wu's "shepherd in Ze" and Wang Zhaojun's "leaving the tomb alone to dusk", which are rich and profound; the presentation of materials in a parallel way avoids the stereotype of spreading, which increases the content Capacity strengthens the strength of verification. (Liu Dehai)

本文给出的启示是，写作素材不是匮乏，而是缺乏“发现”的意识，我们学过的教材，我们触摸的社会……主体自我发现的素材更能融情入文。(刘德海)

The Enlightenment of this paper is that the writing materials are not deficient, but lack of the consciousness of "discovery", the teaching materials we have learned, the society we touch The material of self discovery of the subject can integrate emotion into the text. (Liu Dehai)

现在是25世纪，我独自一个人坐在房里发呆。窗外一片喧嚣，美丽的天空早已失去了它本来的颜色，人们的神色麻木，行色匆匆，使我心里觉得涩涩的。飞快的城市化节奏让每个人都气喘吁吁，觉得我们应该出发，寻找些什么。

It's the 25th Century, and I'm sitting in my room alone. Outside the window, there is a clamor. The beautiful sky has lost its original color. People's looks are numb and hurried, which makes my heart feel astringent. The rapid pace of urbanization makes everyone gasp for breath, thinking that we should start to find something.

有敲门声，小叮当走了进来：“今天我们有新的行程，出发！”

There was a knock on the door, and dingdong came in: "today we have a new journey. Let's go!"

我还没反应过来，已被他拽进了时光隧道……

I haven't realized it yet. I've been dragged into the time tunnel by him