袋鼠族忧思录

"袋鼠族"这一名词最早出现于1998年，首先出现在英国资讯性论坛《时报》中。它最早用来形容西方国家中已经达到成年而无法独立，仍然依靠父母供养的二十多岁的年轻人。如今，在我们国家，"袋鼠族"被用来泛指还未成年但是由于被家庭宠爱而失去自理能力的孩子。

&The term "quot; kangaroo" first appeared in 1998 and first appeared in the British news forum the times. It was first used to describe the twenties in western countries who have reached adulthood and are unable to be independent and still depend on their parents for support. Nowadays, in our country, kangaroo is generally used to refer to children who are under age but have lost their ability of self-care because they are loved by their families.

诚然，我们国家各方面发展日新月异，而与此同时，孩子们享受的待遇却也高得令人咂舌。父母为孩子创造宽裕的经济条件，学校为孩子提供优良的教育设施，社会为孩子提供各种保障和健全的服务。简直是无事不管，无微不至。我们不难从中得出结论：如今的未成年孩子正如一个个袋鼠宝宝，在家庭、学校、社会的袋子里享受着饭来张口、衣来伸手的无忧无虑的生活。他们固然能够很安全很健康的成长，可是袋鼠始终被装在袋子里，它没有感受过外面自然的温度，没有走出来锻炼锻炼筋骨，更没有自由自在地在广阔的蓝天下、茵绿的草地上奔跑。它没有独立获取过食物，何谈有生存能力？它没有见过云消雨霁，何谈有搏击风雨的能力？它没有摔过一跤，何谈有获取成功的能力?一切一切的疑问，不能不让我们对"袋鼠族"产生担忧。

It's true that all aspects of our country are developing rapidly, but at the same time, the treatment that children enjoy is amazingly high. Parents create abundant economic conditions for their children, schools provide excellent educational facilities for their children, and society provides all kinds of security and sound services for their children. It's nothing to do with it. It's not hard to draw a conclusion from it: Nowadays, as a kangaroo baby, the juvenile children enjoy the carefree life of opening their mouths and reaching for their clothes in the bags of family, school and society. They can grow up safely and healthily, but kangaroo is always packed in the bag. It has not felt the natural temperature outside, has not come out to exercise, and has not run freely in the vast blue sky and green grass. It has not obtained food independently. How can it survive? It has not seen the clouds disappear after the rain, how can it talk about the ability to fight the wind and rain? It didn't fall, how can it be successful? All the questions can't help us worry about the kangaroo family.

国家昌盛靠人才，而人才质量靠教育，我们的教育更多的是在传授理论传授知识，忽视了实践和能力，还是把受教育者装在了袋子里。再者，艰苦奋斗是一种永远不会过时的精神，在当今社会，它表现为保持节俭的生活作风，保持不怕困难的勇气和积极乐观的生活态度。而我们现在的教育方式和生活方式可以让这些"袋鼠族"做到艰苦奋斗吗？

The prosperity of our country depends on talents, while the quality of talents depends on education. Our education is more about imparting theories and knowledge, neglecting practice and ability, or putting the educated in a bag. Moreover, hard work is a spirit that will never go out of date. In today's society, it is manifested in maintaining a frugal life style, courage not to be afraid of difficulties and a positive and optimistic attitude towards life. And can our current education and lifestyle make these kangaroos work hard?

如此说来，如今的"袋鼠族"就将成为不可雕琢的朽木了吗？我们事业的大厦会面临危境吗？

In this way, will the kangaroo become a rotten wood? Will the building of our business face danger?

当务之急，我们要全面更新人才教育理念，改革教育制度，让"袋鼠族"走出袋子尝试去拼搏，去竞争，去受挫。顽强的斗志和毅力都是在身经百战的历练中产生的，只有将这一族"袋鼠"完全蜕变为真的勇士，我们才能说我们的事业有了希望，社会的和谐有了保障。我们的国家和民族才能永立于不败之地！

It is imperative that we comprehensively update the concept of talent education, reform the education system, and let the kangaroo race out of the bag to try to fight, compete and be frustrated. The tenacious fighting spirit and perseverance are all produced through the experience of hundreds of battles. Only by transforming this group of kangaroos into real warriors can we say that our cause has hope and social harmony has been guaranteed. Our country and nation can be invincible forever!

"袋鼠"们也该自觉告别袋子，在自然的风雨中做回真正的自己，在自由的天地里收获心灵的丰盈。

&Kangaroo & quot; we should also consciously bid farewell to the bag, be ourselves in the natural wind and rain, and reap the richness of our hearts in the free world.

阅卷小记

Marking

考场作文宜小中见大，不宜从大处着笔。因为受中学生思想认识和作文篇幅的限制，

It is better to see the big in the small than to write in the big. Because of the limitations of middle school students' ideological understanding and composition length,

大处落笔往往容易导致内容空洞。而这篇文章直写当代教育与国家前途的关系，落笔相当大，

Writing in a large place tends to lead to empty content. This article directly describes the relationship between contemporary education and the future of the country, which is quite large,

但是因为形象地引入了"袋鼠族"这一概念，文章并不因"大"而显得"空"。看来，恰当地运用比喻手法的确是使文章生动形象的一个好办法。

However, due to the introduction of the concept of kangaroo, the article does not appear empty because of the large size of kangaroo;. It seems that proper use of metaphor is indeed a good way to make the article vivid and vivid.