浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习 短文改错+书面表达（68）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend/ weekend with you. Luckily I was

　　the

　　am

　　completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8pm in Friday evening.

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　　Though a great progress has been made in science these years, there are still many people live in poor conditions. They make their living with collecting and selling used things. They have not enough money because their children cannot go to school. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?  The answer lie in the population explosion. A president of a developing country once said: “It is us who are to blame for the poverty because we used to ‘produce’ children without limit.” Although these little words sound simple enough, they have clear pointed out one of the cause of the population explosion. 

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　1. 介绍义工旅行的情况；

　　2. 发表你对这一旅行方式的评论（如体验不同文化、节省开支……）。

　　参考词汇：义工volunteer

　　青年旅舍

　　youth hostel

　　改错

　　1．a去掉

　　2. live – living或 who live

　　3. with – by

　　4. because–so

　　5. you think前加do

　　6. lie – lies

　　7. us – we

　　8. little – few

　　9. clear – clearly

　　10. cause – causes

　　作文

　　Volunteer Travel, which is familiar to foreigners, has nowadays become more and more popular in China. Young travelers volunteer to work for youth hostels so that they can eat and live there for free. At the same time, they can enjoy the local scenery in their spare time.

　　In my opinion, volunteer travel has some advantages and benefits you a lot. It can save you a lot of money by providing free accommodations, which makes it possible for you to travel to many more places and experience different cultures. Meanwhile, volunteer travel enriches your life by offering different jobs in youth hostels, which also can change your way of life. Believe it or not, volunteer travel will be wonderful memories in your life.