2016届高考英语一轮复习课件：第三部分 写作提升系列第二板块 第11节(北师大版)

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　　文体写作面面观 第十一节　议论文 议论文的写作是根据提供的信息，如图画、图表、提纲等表达自己观点的作文，是一种在近几年的高考英语试卷中出现频率越来越高的考查形式，要求考生根据所提供的信息写一篇短文，或叙述一件事情，或介绍某一事物，或通过图画揭示某一社会现象，并结合所写内容阐述自己的观点。这类作文的几个注意事项： 1．把所提供的信息有机地串联起来，使之成为内容连贯的句子。 2．确定短文需用的时态和人称。 3．根据描述的内容发表议论，表明自已的观点。 佳句递送 [好开头] 1．As is apparently shown in the chart above... 正如上面图表中明确表示的那样…… 2．As is vividly described in the picture above... 正如上面图画中生动描述的那样…… 3．The picture presents to us that... 这幅画向我们呈现了…… [好结尾] 1．In a word，we should make efforts/measures to improve... 总之，我们应该努力/采取措施来提高…… 2．I don’t think it good to use this kind of language. 我认为使用这种语言没有什么好处。 3．Only in this way can we solve the problem more effectively. 只有用这种方法，我们才能更有效地解决问题。 [好句子] 1．对于这场灾难也许有两个主要原因。 ①Two main reasons contribute to the disaster. ②There might have been two main reasons for the disaster. ③There might have been two main reasons contributing to the disaster. 2．众所周知，电视、手机、网络在信息时代被广泛使用。 ①It is universally acknowledged that TV，cells and the web are widely used in an information age. ②It is well known that TV，cells and the web are widely used in an information age. ③As is well known to us all，TV，cells and the web are widely used in an information age.

　　[题目要求] ( 北京高考)请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

　　You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim.Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. 佳作赏析 [现场阅卷] 精彩变式 ①用as引导的非限制性定语从句改写加黑部分 ②用“It is＋adj.＋that”句式改写：有必要…… ③用“动词(try)＋and＋陈述句”改写加黑部分

　　升级·五档作文 ①As is vividly described in the picture above，there is usually a difference between one’s dream and reality.②It is necessary that people should learn to face the reality. Everyone has his dream.However，it is not so easy for people to realize their dreams every time.Just like the man in the picture，instead of the big fish he wishes for，he actually catches a small one. In my opinion，people need to learn to accept the reality and keep on trying.③Another try/one more try，and they may gain what they dream of.

　　下面这幅漫画展现了人生的一个道理，请根据你对这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。 演练提升 短文应包含以下内容： 1．描述图片内容，如图中人物的行为和心情等； 2．揭示图画所要表达的人生哲理； 3．结合自身实际，谈谈这一漫画给你的启示。 注意：1.词数120左右； 2．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：挖土cut earth　钻石diamond Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up. In this picture，we can see

　　【参考范文】 Many people fail in life because they do not realize how close they are to success when they give up. In this picture，we can see a man is cutting earth in a tunnel，hoping to find some diamonds.He makes great efforts in his work.However，after a long time of pains without gains，he decides to give up.With one or two more attempts of cutting，he would have seen those diamonds right in front of him. This story tells us a very simple but important piece of truth：we should be confident in what we have chosen to do and never stop our efforts until we succeed. As a student preparing for the entrance examinations，I should learn a lesson from the man.Just like the diamonds in the picture，success is just waiting for my last efforts.I have been cutting earth for so many years，so I will never give up before I succeed.