2017届湖北省武汉市高考英语书面表达训练（2）

　　湖北省武汉市2017高考英语书面表达暑假练习（2）及参考范文

　　【广东省湛江市2017模拟】基础写作 （共1小题；满分15分）

　　最近中国多个地区出现雾霾天气，某中学高三（3）班就此话题组织了一次班会活动，假设你是该班的通讯员，请根据以下信息写一篇英文报道给学校刊物。

　　时间：2017.1.5下午第三节 地点：学校会议室 主持人：班长王涛

　　活动目的 认识日益严峻的空气污染问题，增强环保意识。

　　活动流程 1. 利用PPT展示图片及调查结果：空气污染致我国每年约25万人过早死亡，数万儿童健康受危害；

　　2. 小组讨论：如何应对雾霾天气；

　　3. 班主任点评。

　　活动小结 ……

　　【写作要求】

　　只能用5个句子表达全部内容。文章开头已给出，不计入总句数。atmospheric pollution worsens and the air quality declines, smog has occurred in many parts of China.

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　　【参考范文】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）

　　As the atmospheric pollution worsens and the air quality declines, smog has occurred in many parts of China. With the theme of “Bring back a blue sky and white clouds”, a class meeting hosted by our monitor Wang Tao was held in the Meeting Hall among all the teachers and students of Class 3, Senior3 during the 2nd section class on the afternoon of Jan. 5, 2017. The activity aimed to get the students informed of the fact of the increasingly serious hazy weather and raise our awareness of environmental protection.

　　In the class meeting, the PPT was used to present some pictures and related survey results, which show that air pollution in China causes about 250,000 early deaths per year and tens of thousands of children’ s health may get threatened. Then, we discussed in groups about how to deal with air pollution and then, our head teacher gave some comments.

　　It is the meeting that makes us aware of the importance of clean air and determine to help fight against air pollution.

　　（2017北京卷）第一节 (15分)

　　你给英国朋友Chris写一封信，内容包括：

　　1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；

　　2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；

　　3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

　　注意： 1.词数不少于50.

　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Chris,

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　　Yours,

　　Joe

　　【考点】考察提纲类作文

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于应用文中的书信，要求写信给英国朋友Chris说明取消计划的原因并建议推测旅行至8月份。以第一人称为主。要点：1.你们原计划7月份一同去云南旅游；2.由于脚部受伤，你无法按原计划前往；3.表达你的歉意并建议将旅行推迟到8月份。

　　这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，

　　也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

　　【一句多译】

　　我可以建议把旅行推迟到8月份早些时候吗？

　　（1）Can I suggest that we put it off until early august?

　　（2）Would you mind if we we put it off until early august?

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear Chris,

　　How is everything going?

　　I remember we planned to visit Yunnan in July but now bucause my left foot was injured, I cannot go with you as planned.

　　I’m sorry about it. Can I suggest that we put it off until early august? I wish you could understand. I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Yours,

　　Joe

　　【广东省湛江市2017模拟】读写任务（共1小题；满分25分）

　　阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　The officials in the White House and CIA (中央情报局)are rejecting Edward Snowden's beg for mercy. “Mr. Snowden has been against the U.S. law,” White House adviser Dan Pfeiffer said on Sunday about the former systems analyst who has turned fugitive (逃亡者) in Russia. “He should return to the US and face the justice and judgment, and there is no possibility for mercy and forgiveness.”

　　However, many people support Snowden and a sociology professor Svallfors in Sweden has recommended Snowden for the Nobel Peace Prize for his “heroic effort at great personal cost” disclosing the spying conducted by the National Security Agency of United States. He wrote, “Because of his bravery, Snowden helped to make the world a little bit better and safer”.

　　It may be too late for Snowden to receive the award this year, but the nomination should be taken seriously by the Nobel Prize committee for next year’s prize. If Snowden is awarded the prize in 2017, he would be the youngest Nobel Peace Winner in the history of the prize.

　　【写作内容】读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

　　American officials refuse to forgive Edward Snowden because he is believed to have done harm to national security, but someone supports and recommends him for the Nobel Peace Prize for his courage.

　　We are now stepping into the Information Era in which security is becoming vital because it greatly affects many aspects like politics, commerce and our daily life. Thus, much emphasis must be placed on it，or a range of losses will be brought to us.

　　Take an experience of mine for example. Once my QQ was stolen by a hacker. Not only did he change the password, but also he pretended to be me and told my friends that I had got in trouble and been in urgent need of a large sum of money. My friends were worried and some hurriedly sent money into the hacker’s bank account. As a result, my friends were cheated due to information exposure and I felt rather sorry about that.

　　Therefore, it is high time that we did something to keep information secure. Personally, laws and regulations must be established. Besides, to improve technology is another solution. Meanwhile, we are supposed to raise the awareness of self-protection. Only in this way can we ensure our rights and interests.

　　【广东省高三考前冲刺卷(八)基础写作(共1小题，满分15分)

　　今天是九月九日重阳节(the Double Ninth Festival)，你作为志愿者和班上的其他同学到养老院去慰问老人，以下是今天的主要活动：

　　1．向老人赠送礼物(鲜花、自制贺卡……)；

　　2．为老人提供服务(做清洁、陪老人聊天……)。

　　写作内容

　　请你写一篇日记，包括以下内容

　　1．记录当天的活动；

　　2．发表自己的感想。

　　写作要求

　　只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　评分标准

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，语篇连贯。

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　　基础写作参考范文September 9th,2011

　　Today is the Double Ninth Festival，the traditional Chinese festival for the elderly；we visited the Nursing Home to celebrate the special day.

　　When we got there，we visited the elderly in their rooms in groups，presenting them with flowers and self­made cards to show our respect and love.Then we did some cleaning and washing for them with the help of the nurses.As some old people felt lonely，we chatted with them about their old days，changes of our city，or anything they are interested in.

　　The elderly have done so much for their families as well as for our country，so I think we should take more care and respect for them.

　　广东省高三考前冲刺卷(八)读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　There is a story telling of a religious master who is said to be capable of moving mountains.A man came to him asking for a demonstration.The master sat in front of a mountain for a moment，then went to the other side of it and declared the end of the demonstration.All the audiences were greatly puzzled and begged him for an explanation.He said，“There has never been a way of moving mountains；what you can do is to go to the mountain if it doesn’t come.”

　　One of my friends，though with the makings of a merchant，was bent on being a painter.He resigned from office and devoted himself entirely to painting at home.Several years，however，saw no progress in this regard.

　　A painful retrospection brought him to his senses.He made up his mind to take up business in place of painting.It took him only a few years to become a rich businessman.Meanwhile he spent his spare time exchanging experience and skills in painting and calligraphy.His works finally won acclamation by expert painters and were on sale in art galleries and grand hotels.He had his collections published and his dream of becoming a painter came true at last.

　　写作内容

　　请就以上的文章写一篇读后感，内容包括：

　　1．以约30词概括短文的内容要点。

　　2．然后以约120词就“学会改变”为主题，发表你的看法，并至少包含以下的内容要点：

　　(1)根据你的生活经历，当所面对的事实无法改变时，是否应该改变自己？

　　(2)简述一个改变自己的例子。

　　(3)你认为有时候改变自己，才能最终改变属于自己的世界吗？

　　写作要求

　　1．你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的观点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不要抄袭阅读材料中的句子。

　　2．标题自定。

　　评分标准

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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　　读写任务参考范文Get Yourself Changed When Facing Something Unchangeable

　　A religious master and a painter tried to change themselves when they were faced with something unchangeable，and as a result they both achieved an eventual change of the world around them.

　　The stories remind me of my cousin who used to complain about English learning.He thought it unnecessary to learn a foreign language and ignored it at all.As a result，he fell behind the others in his class and even failed in the exam.After realizing that it was not only a main subject but also the most widely spoken language in the world，he developed a good attitude.Thanks to his English teacher，he was well involved in English classes.He practiced listening and speaking English after class.What’s more，he kept an English diary，which helped him think in English.A year later，he became one of the top ten students in his class.Believe it or not，he was even awarded in an English contest in his school.

　　As far as I’m concerned，change your attitude when you find the environment unchangeable.Only in this way can you achieve an eventual change of the world around you.