2017届湖北省武汉市高考英语书面表达训练（1）

　　湖北省武汉市2017高考英语书面表达暑假练习（1）及参考范文

　　【湖北省武汉市2017模拟】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

　　请你根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　A man can fail many times, but he isn’t a failure until he begins to blame somebody else.

　　--- J. Burroughs

　　注意: ①无须写标题；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合你生活中的一个事例；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　⑤词数不少于120,如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　【参考范文】短文写作A possible version:

　　It's a common sense that we are always encountering much failure in different stages of life. Under these circumstances, what matters most is not only our persistence but also our attitudes.

　　In our daily life, however hard we try, failure will accompany us like shades. When it comes to this topic, unforgettable memories crowd in my mind. I once did so badly in a critical exam that I lost a precious opportunity to be admitted to a key senior high school. I wasn’t aware of my laziness and carelessness. Instead, I thought the difficult exam and the neglect of my parents were to blame for my failure. I regarded myself as a stander-by and never learned to shoulder responsibilities for my own. It was my head-teacher's timely instruction that made me face difficult situation any time it appeared, after which I became more confident and diligent. The coming success made me popular among my peers. Never shall I forget this impressive experience.

　　It can be concluded from the above mentioned that positive attitude makes a true man while being timid before misfortune results in a failure. Facing any failure bravely can achieve a great success.

　　【湖北省天门市2017模拟】短文写作（共1题；满分30分）

　　目前我国中学生的健康状况越来越差，这使父母、学校和专家感到忧虑。为解决这一问题，有些人提出将体育纳入高考。请结合实际谈谈你的看法。

　　        注意：①文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；  ②③ 词数120。The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents, schools and experts. To have this problem solved, some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination.

　　I’m against the idea because it is by no means practical. Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task. It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field.

　　However, good health is an essential foundation of learning. Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning.

　　Therefore, it is schools’ responsibility to help develop their students’ awareness of the importance of keeping fit. Moreover, schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise.

　　【黑龙江省哈三中2017书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是李华，刚刚参加完高考，已被中国某大学的英语专业录取。现在准备利用今年暑假时间参加英国剑桥大学的暑期课程（Cambridge Summer Session 2017）。请写一封电子邮件给负责人Mr．Smith，说明自己的情况并询问相关事宜。内容主要包括：

　　1．询问暑期课程的设置情况（如：课程内容、课程数量、时间安排等）；

　　2．询问活动期间住宿情况（如：是住宿家庭还是学校宿舍等）。

　　注意：1．词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Mr．Smith,Yours , sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文Dear Mr. Smith,

　　I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student, having finished the National College Entrance Examinations. I am planning to apply for the Cambridge Summer Session 2017. Now I’m writing to ask several questions concerned.

　　Firstly, I’m curious to know about the courses. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Since I major in English, I would very much like to take some courses related to English literature and culture. I also want to know the schedule of these courses to see whether I’ll have time to visit other places in Britain on weekends. So I would

　　appreciate it if you could forward a course plan to me?

　　Secondly, do you provide boarding during the Summer Session? Are all the students living on campus or will you arrange home-stay?

　　Thank you in advance! Looking forward to your reply!

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　一（2017安徽卷）

　　为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。

　　内容要点如下：

　　1．表示理解并给予安慰；

　　2．提出建议并说明理由。

　　注意：

　　1．词数120左右；

　　2．信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

　　3．信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪

　　Hi Worried，

　　I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a had time at the moment.

　　Yours,

　　Jamie

　　【考点】考察半开放性作文

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于半开放性作文，要为你编辑Jamie的口吻回复Worried的求助信，他的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。要注意书信的格式和特殊用词。要点：1.很遗憾听说对方有此问题。并解释每个人都可能会遇见这样的问题，所以不必担心。只有的是要学会控制自己的脾气。2.提出建议：与信任的人进行交流，告诉别人你的困扰，释放自己的压力。同时多参加各种户外活动，和朋友多玩球类运动。保持乐观的心态。

　　对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

　　【一句多译】

　　每个人都会有过这样的一段时期，在这时情况都很糟糕，所以你不要太担心了。

　　（1）The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.　

　　（2）It is true that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much.

　　【参考范文】

　　Hi Worried,

　　I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. Here are three useful tips:

　　First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your ftiends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

　　I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

　　Yours,

　　Jamie

　　【广东省高三考前冲刺卷(二)读写任务(共1小题，满分25分)

　　阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone.Others like to be with friends most of the time.Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends?

　　I prefer to spend most of my time with friends，because friends offer excitement and new ideas，they can comfort me when something bad happens，and spending too much time by myself can be boring.

　　Friends can offer excitement and fresh ideas to a situation.For example，if I am shopping，a friend makes the experience more fun.We can look at things together，and explore our likes and dislikes.

　　Friends can also comfort me if something bad happens.If I get bad news，and a friend is around，I do not have to feel bad by myself.A friend will try to cheer me up，and attempt to take my mind off whatever negative things happen.For example，last year I broke my leg and was in a cast all summer.I had friends around me to cheer me up and distract me from the misfortune.

　　Overall，I think having friends around me is the best way for me to spend my time.

　　写作内容

　　1．以约30个词概括作者喜欢与朋友共处的原因。

　　2．然后以约120个词写一篇短文，包括以下要点：

　　(1)你愿意独处还是与朋友共处？

　　(2)请简要说明原因，并以你的经历来支持你的观点。

　　写作要求

　　1．可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2．标题自定。

　　3．文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　评分标准

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯。

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　　读写任务参考范文Enjoy Being Alone

　　The author prefers to spend his or her spare time with friends because he or she thinks friends can offer excitement and fresh ideas to a situation and they can comfort him or her if something bad happens.

　　Personally，I prefer to spend most of my time alone.Friends are important in our growth，but we should not forget the shortcomings of spending too much time with friends.

　　First，peer pressure may direct us into some wrong doings.In order to please their so­called “friends”，teenagers may let their friends talk them into doing bad things.Moreover，even real friends may have different preferences.For example，I like classical music，but most of my friends love the noisy rock and roll.If we insist on spending our time together，both my friends and I would become unhappy.For this reason，I often feel like staying alone，especially when I want to do some reading.

　　To sum up，it’s good to have real friends，but we also have something that is for us to do alone.