2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：42

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达42

　　江苏省南京市、盐城市2017届高三第一次模拟考试英语试题请阅读下面背景材料，并根据问题，用英语写一篇作文向学校英文报投稿。

　　In China, an online shopping festival falls on November 11 when millions of Chinese shoppers 20 to Tmall.com and Taobao.com. In 2017, Tmall and Taobao together made 19. 1 billion in sales oil that dayHowever, in 2017, the shopping festival kicked off with an even sponger start-sales hit 100 million yuan 55 seconds alter midnight and reached 35 billion at the end of the day. This is just one of many companies that did business oil that day.

　　What does this material reflect? What is behind the phenomenon? And what are your comments and advice on it?

　　注意：

　　1. 词数150左右。开头己给出，不计入总词数。

　　2. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

　　3. 参考词犯：理性的rational

　　With the swift development of the Internet,__________________________________

　　___________________________.

　　【答案】

　　【参考范文】

　　With the swift development of the Internet, we can see online shopping has become a new trend in our daily life.There are several factors behind this phenomenon. First of all, it is very convenient for people to purchase what they want or like with the Internet easily accessible via their computers or telephones. Second, people shopping online have more choices of goods than those in real shops and area able to save time as well. Third, the relatively low prices on the Internet account for higher sales online.

　　In my opinion, as the pace of life quickens, it is natural for people to choose online shopping to save time and energy. But when we enjoy the convenience it brings us, we should be careful because sometimes the quality of goods cannot be guaranteed. Furthermore, we had better stay national and just buy what we really need; otherwise, it would cause a waste of money and resources.

　　【解析】【写作指导】

　　本文是材料作文，根据所给的材料，说明这种现象的潜在原因是什么，利弊是什么，你自己的观点是什么。注意时态用的是一般现在时。恰当地使用连接过渡词，以使行文连贯。

　　海南省2017届高三高考预测金卷 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25 分） 假如你是李华，最近你在浏览一个新西兰中学网站时，看到一位名叫Tom的中学生的留言，他计划在暑假期间到中国的北京旅游，希望能有一名中国留学生做他的导游。你对此很感兴趣，请根据以下要点提示写一封e－mail给他，介绍你的相关情况。

　　主要内容包括 ：1.希望做他的导游；2.打算如何给他做导游；3.期盼他的回复。

　　注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加情节，以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头已为你写好。

　　Dear Tom，

　　Recently, while browsing a senior high school website of New Zealand, I saw the message you posted on it.

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】书面表达：：

　　With the development of people’s living conditions, more and more people have their own cars. Some of us think it’s good to own a car. Firstly, it’s a convenient, fast, and comfortable means of transportation. Secondly, it shows that people are becoming richer, and the country much more stronger. It also makes relative businesses and industries develop faster.

　　Others have different opinions. They think that cars give off waste gas and pollute the environment. Too many cars will have some bad effects, such as more accidents. Besides, overloaded parking cars is another big problem.

　　In my view, people should think carefully before they buy a car.

　　福建省莆田一中2017届高三高考考前模拟 英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分2分）如今, 中国的许多城市出现了跳广场舞的热潮, 对于这个现象, 人们褒贬不一。请根据以下提示, 用英语给报社写一篇报道。

　　大部分人赞成, 认为是一种健康的活动,省钱；

　　一些人反对, 认为影响他人的休息, 有噪音污染；

　　你的看法。

　　注意：1. 词数120左右2. 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。

　　Nowadays square dancing is getting more and more popular with Chinese people in many cities. Some public places are usually crowded with happy dancers, especially in the morning and evening. But now people have thrown doubt on this issue.

　　To be honest, most people say yes to square dancing, considering it a green form of exercising to keep fit. Besides, it is money-saving. But meanwhile, some others are greatly opposed to square dancing. They argue that the happiness of those dancers is built on the pain of others who have to suffer from the loud music and noise. With their peace of life disturbed, they are angry with and even run into conflict with the dancers.

　　In my view, square dancing is certainly beneficial to the whole society so long as the dancers show concern for others’ needs. What’s more, our government should invest more money to build some specified recreation centers for people.

　　2017年高考真题——英语（广东A卷）【题文】阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other people’s clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.

　　The money was i …

　　me savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.

　　Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebody’s child go to college gave her much pleasure.

　　[写作内容]

　　1用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

　　2.用约120个词就Miss McCarty的捐助谈谈你的想法，内容包括：

　　（1）你如何看待她的捐助行为；

　　（2）你认为她的捐助对受惠学生有哪些影响；

　　（3）如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。

　　[写作要求]

　　1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。

　　2.作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准]

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　【答案】

　　Oseola McCarty, an ordinary worker with a thrifty lifestyle, donated a great deal of money to a university, which aroused public attention and earned her widespread social recognition. In return, she received a sense of satisfaction and fulfillment.

　　Virtuous and warm-hearted, the lady concerned has donated a considerable amount of saving to help college students struggling with financial difficulties, thereby motivating people at any other corner of the world to participate in this affectionate activity.

　　From where I stand, not only will the lady's generosity paint a very brilliant blue print for the future of those students in want of money, but also it will rekindle their faith in life by convincing them that their life goal is elevating and worth trying.

　　Given the choice, I would make donations to those who still live under the bottom line of the modern living condition.Convincing arguments as follows can be made to support my stance. For one thing, generous and selfless dedication may take indispensable assistance to them, especially for the time when they are confronted with pain and sorrow,twists and turns. For another, just as an Indian old saying goes, roses in her hand; flavor in mine. That is to say, great satisfaction would step slowly and gracefully in to the mercy-producers' souls as well.

　　To bring as many angel-like smiles as possible to our society,we should practice more beneficial performance by leading a thrifty life.

　　【解析】

　　解析：

　　【考点】考察任务型写作

　　【写作指导】

　　本文要求首先叙述短文内容：别人眼里很贫穷的却为别人捐了$ 150,000。该部分一定要简洁扼要，不要使用过多的复杂句式，容易超过字数限制。

　　然后就如何看待她的捐助行为，捐助行为的影响，以及如果你捐助，你会选择什么群体，分别展开阐述。本文使用一般现在时，在谈自己的看法时使用第一人称。考生可以以自己的亲身经历为例进行详细说明。

　　本文给考生自由发挥的余地很大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。

　　山东省泰安市2015届高三上学期期中考试英语试题

　　【题文】

　　假设你是高三学生李华，你的美国笔友Sam来信询问你目前如何进行高效复习的。请根据以下要点，结合自身实际写封回信。

　　1．学习方面：科学规划，提高效率；

　　2．生活方面：加强锻炼，健康饮食；

　　3．其他……

　　注意：

　　1．词数120—150左右；

　　2．开头语和结尾语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　　3．适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern．_________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes!

　　【答案】

　　【范文】

　　Dear Sam，

　　Thank you for your concern. In your letter, you asked me how to revise efficiently. As a student, it’s important for us to revise efficiently, which has a great influence on our achievements. As far as I am concerned, the following are all that I do in my study life.

　　To start with, you should have a revising plan, in which there must be the following aspects, what、when and how to revise. Next , you ought to keep in a good mood. Only when you feel happy can you learn efficiently and delightedly . Provided that you are upset now, do you want to study ? Thirdly, healthy body is a must.

　　There is no doubt that illnesses have a bad effect on our study. As a consequence , you’d better exercise regularly everyday so as to keep healthy. Last but not least, you must be strong-minded, since you you’ll find some questions difficult to deal with.

　　I’m more than glad to help you. And I hope these suggestions can give you some help.

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　【技巧点拨】

　　主意审题，审清内容，时态，确定主题；

　　一定要使用亮点句型，重要语法现象，如：非谓语动词，从句，倒装句等；

　　恰当使用连接词，让上下文更加连贯；

　　注意卷面整洁，书写标准。