2016届高考英语二轮专题训练书面表达：48

　　高考英语二轮专题训练 书面表达48

　　2017高考真题英语（陕西卷）

　　【题文】

　　假定你是中学生李华。美国一个中学校长代表团即将访问你校并出席英语周的一项活动。请根据写作要点和写作要求写一篇欢迎词。

　　写作要点：

　　1.表示对客人的欢迎；

　　2.介绍此项活动（如活动目的、内容等）；

　　3.表达对客人的祝愿。

　　写作要求：

　　1.词数不少于100；

　　2.称呼已经给出，请写欢迎词正文；

　　3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

　　Dear American guests,

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　　【答案】

　　【思路点拨】本题是应用文写作，体裁是写欢迎辞，也是材料作文，文体格式已经给出，因此在审题环节主要从以下几点着手：（1）主体时态：一般现在时；（2）主体人称：第三人称；第二人称；（3）写作要点：①欢迎客人；②“英语周”活动；③活动目的；④活动内容；⑤祝愿。在审题结束后要注意表达的准确性，行文的逻辑性和句式、词汇的多样性，尽量使用多样化的词汇和句式，并注意写作的层次，恰当使用连接词和过渡性词汇，以增强文章的逻辑性和可读性。最后就是要注意书写的美观和标点符号的准确使用，避免拼写、标点等较低级的错误等。

　　湖北省孝感高级中学2017届高三五月模底考试 英语

　　【题文】短文写作（共一题；满分30分）

　　请根据以下提示，并结合生活中的事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　We have unselfish mothers who have brought up, unselfish teachers teaching us, and unselfish friends who are always ready to help us. We should also learn to be unselfish.

　　注意：①无须写标题；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　⑤词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

　　This world is filled with unselfish people, because of whom our world has become a lovely and beautiful place to stay.

　　When I grew up, I have met countless people who are always unselfish to me. In the middle of last term, just as I was busy with my lesson, I suddenly fell ill and had to stay away from school for a couple of weeks. Seeing this, our monitor Li, together with some other classmates, offered to help me with my lesson. It was their unselfish help that I managed to catch up in my lessons. Looking back on those days, I am impressed by their help and feel gratitude. They have taught me the importance of being unselfish and offering help to those in need.

　　As the saying goes on, no one is an island. Truer words were never spoken. Only when we show concern to others and offer help to people can we unite together and make a difference.

　　2017高考真题英语（江西卷）

　　【题文】第二节 书面表达

　　假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。

　　1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；

　　2.学会做人：真诚，友善；

　　3.学会其他：考生自拟。

　　注意：1.词数120左右；

　　2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总次数。

　　Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

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　　Thank you!

　　【答案】

　　【考点】考察提纲类作文

　　【写作指导】

　　本文属于提纲类短文，母校邀请毕业生李华做一个关于“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙。谈谈自己的体会，主要叙述过去的事情，使用一般过去时和第一人称。要点：1.学会学习：方法，习惯等； 2.学会做人：真诚，友善；3.学会其他：积极参加课外活动和体育活动等。

　　提纲类作文，需要我们用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

　　【一句多译】

　　养成好习惯很重要

　　（1）Developing a goood habit is also of importance.

　　（2）Is very important for us to develop a good habit.

　　【参考范文】

　　Good morning, everyone! It is my honour to be here to share with my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.

　　In the coming three years , our school life will be challenging. First ,we should learn to learn efficiently. Personally, I used to try effective method to achieve my academic goals. Developing a goood habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what had been taught after class.

　　In addition, we should learne how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere.

　　Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoors activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.

　　No pains no gains. I am sure that with great efforts ,you will enjoy a colorful and fruitful life here.

　　Thank you!

　　宁夏银川一中2017届高三第三次模拟考试

　　英语

　　【题文】书面表达（满分25分）

　　你们班在本周三早晨8点在学校门口集合乘坐校车去参观一所示范学校，要求全班同学都准时参加，请按照图中规定的顺序参观（从主楼出发），根据图示请你用英语写一篇口头通知。要点包含：

　　1.参观的事宜

　　2.学校的建筑和功能

　　3.参观该校的顺序

　　注意：1. 词数100左右；

　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3. 开头和结尾已为你写好。

　　生词：喷泉fountain

　　Dear my classmates,

　　May I have your attention, please? __________________________________________

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　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　【答案】Dear my classmates,

　　May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. Our class is going to pay a visit to a model high school this Wednesday morning. We will go there by school bus at 8 a.m. All the students are required to gather at the school gate on time.

　　Having reached the model high school, we will start from the main building. First we will visit the lab building, where students usually do experiments. Then is the lecture hall, in which students often attend lectures. After that, we will go to the art center opposite to the lecture hall. Far outside you will hear the students playing musical instruments. Between lecture Hall and Art Center lies a beautiful fountain, the center of the schoolyard. Finally we will arrive at the playground at the far back of the school, a place for students to do all kinds of sports.

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　江苏省南京市2017届高三考前冲刺训练（南京市教研室） 英语

　　【题文】书面表达

　　请你根据对下图的理解，用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包括以下内容：

　　1. 简单描述图片内容；

　　2. 谈谈你的理解和想法；

　　3. 举例说明理由。

　　注意: 1.词数：150词左右;

　　2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数;

　　3. 参考词汇：fertilizer

　　n. 肥料

　　Haste Makes Waste

　　As we all know, there goes an old saying, “Haste Makes Waste”. _________________________

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　　【答案】Possible version:

　　Haste Makes Waste

　　As we all know, there is an old saying, “Haste Makes Waste”. As is vividly shown in the picture, the couple get astonished when seeing their crops withering/ dead. The husband can’t help losing his temper, scolding his wife for her improper way of farming, while the wife argues that she simply wants the crops to grow faster by fertilizing more. She never thought too many fertilizers would cause the crops to die.

　　The picture clearly conveys a message that if people are eager to finish a task in a hurry, the outcome may be less satisfactory and even goes to the opposite. As is often the case, we can’t take every detail into consideration before a quick decision is made. Under such circumstances we attach too much importance to quick speed at the expense of high quality, which eventually contributes to greater losses. Additionally, more unexpected accidents may take place when we are in a hurry.

　　Remembering English words is a good case in point. If you set a goal of reciting 50 words within a short time, the result may let you down, for you forget them easily. However, if you slow down a little bit, for example, divide the words into several parts, one part at a time and go over them frequently, they can be kept longer and more easily in mind. Comparing the two methods, we find the latter is more efficient.

　　In conclusion, haste makes waste. If we can apply it to our daily life, we are bound to make progress.

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