2017届高考英语一轮复习全套课件：第3部分 写作指导 专题突破1 提纲作文（北师大版）

　　【参考范文】 Dear Tom, I’m glad that you are going to visit Beijing for two days.As the capital city of China,Beijing lies in the north of China,covering a land of 16,000 square kilometers with a population of 1.3 million.As an international city,it is blessed with the most world cultural heritage sites on the earth. As for your 2-day schedule,my suggestions are as follows.On the first day,you may pay a visit to the Great Wall,where you can take some photos as well as buy some souvenirs.On the second day,you can stand on the Tian’anmen Gate-tower to overlook the Forbidden City.After that,you can look around the Palace Museum,so as to immerse yourself in the charm of traditional Chinese culture.What do you think of this plan? Welcome to Beijing!I hope you’ll fall in love with it when arriving here.Looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Li Hua

　　(二)(2016·安徽皖江名校联考) 你校学生会将举行一场高三年级的英语话剧比赛,请你以校学生会李明的名义给外教Wilson Smith写一封信请其担任裁判并说明话剧比赛的相关事宜。应包括以下内容: 1.每班限报一个话剧,人数不超过10人,不少于2人; 2.话剧表演必须用英语表达,时长不超过半小时; 3.话剧内容必须思想健康,适合中学生观看; 4.时间:12月10日; 5.地点:学校大礼堂。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

　　Dear Mr Smith, How is everything going on?  

　　We are looking forward to your replay.Thank you. Your sincerely, Li Ming

　　【参考范文】 Dear Mr Smith, How is everything going on?May we have the honor to invite you to be the judge of our coming play contest?We would really appreciate it if your answer is YES. The Students’ Union is going to hold an English play contest among Senior 3 students on December 10th.Each class can only present only one play,in which the number of participants should be limited between 2 and 10 students.All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour.In addition,the content of the plays must be mentally healthy and suitable for Senior students.The location will be in the school hall.

　　It is really a good chance to practice students’ oral English as well as to show their talents.We really hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective. We are looking forward to your replay.Thank you. Your sincerely, Li Ming

　　六、倡议书 典例　北京某中学讨论是否应该骑车上学。假如你是该校学生会主席,请你用英语写一封倡议书,号召同学们骑自行车上学。内容需包括: 1.建议骑自行车上学; 2.自行车是学生常用交通工具; 3.骑自行车的一些好处; 4.骑自行车需注意的问题。 注意: 1.词数100左右,信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数); 2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

　　Dear schoolmates, Recently,a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school.  

　　The Students’ Union June 13

　　【参考范文】 Dear schoolmates, Recently,a debate concerning whether we should cycle to school or not has appeared in our school.As far as I am concerned,we should ride to and from school.Firstly,riding a bicycle to and from school is very common among the students,for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot.Next,parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school,no matter how busy the traffic could be.Actually,bicycle-riding is also a practical way to do exercise and protect the environment.What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you are off it.In this way,you’ll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you are here.Don’t hesitate,everybody!Let’s ride to school! The Students’ Union June 13

　　1.从写作内容上来说,一般倡议书中应该包括倡议原因、目的、具体内容和要求等。 2.从写作手法上来说,倡议书的措辞要贴切,情感要真挚,语言要富于号召性,可多用should,ought to,may,can等表示建议的情态动词;倡议书的篇幅不宜过长,开头要简单明了,吸引同学们的注意,结尾最好加上简洁有力的呼吁。 3.从谋篇布局来说,倡议书书写格式和一般书信大致相同,一般由称呼、正文、结尾、落款四部分组成,有些倡议书还可根据需要加适当的标题。 (1)称呼。写称呼的目的是为了明确倡议的对象,一般要依据倡议的对象而选用适当的称呼,如:Dear friends,Dear schoolmates,Dear editor,Dear students等。

　　(2)正文。倡议意在引起他人的响应,这就要求作者须清楚说明倡议背景、原因,申明倡议目的,做到让人信服,人们才能响应并自觉行动。倡议的内容也要具体,要写明有什么作用。一般倡议的内容可分为几点来写,这样倡议的对象更容易明白,效果也更好。 (3)结尾。结尾可表明倡议者的决心和希望或者提出某种建议,但是一般不在结尾用些表示敬意或祝愿的话。 (4)落款。在右下方署名发出倡议的集体或倡议者的姓名,然后另起一行,署上发出倡议的时间。

　　1.Please don’t smoke,spit or litter in public places.请不要在公共场所吸烟、吐痰或乱扔杂物。 2.Let’s make a good network environment.Let’s be civilized Netizen.让我们携手共建良好的网络环境。让我们做文明的网民。 3.Hopefully you will join in the action and extend warm help to those needy persons.但愿你会加入这项活动,向需要帮助的人传递温暖。 4.We all want to grow up happily and healthily,and for this goal we must do several things.我们都希望快乐、健康地成长,为了这个目标我们必须做些什么。 5.What I want to stress is that each of us should listen more to others.我想强调的是我们需要更多地倾听他人。

　　6.We students should listen more to our classmates,thus we will help and learn from each other,and a friendship is likely to be formed.我们学生应当更多地倾听同班同学的声音,这样我们就会互相帮助、互相学习,并可能发展出友谊。 7.It is a good idea for us Senior 3 students to have daily exercise,for taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind.我们高三的学生每天锻炼身体是有益的,因为锻炼能够增强体质,保持清醒的头脑。 8.The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day,in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.教育部号召学生们每天锻炼一小时,希望他们能拥有可以工作五十年和享受一生的健康体魄。

　　(一)(2016·黑龙江齐齐哈尔实验中学期中考试) 假设你是李华。为了促进学生多读书,读好书,打造校园书香氛围,你校发起读书运动。请你按照以下要点写一篇倡议书,倡导同学们读书。 表达要点: 1.为什么读书; 2.读什么书,怎样读书; 3.发起倡议。 注意: 1.可适当增加细节使行文连贯; 2.词数100左右; 3.开头已经为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear schoolmates,

　　【参考范文】 Dear schoolmates, Do you like reading? Books are like our friends.Just like hanging around with a good friend,reading can broaden our horizons,enlarge our knowledge,improve our taste for life and keep us company when we feel lonely. So what books should we read?We should choose the books which benefit us most with knowledge,virtue and good interest.And we’d better think while reading instead of just taking in everything blindly.Taking notes will help us learn more. Now,aiming to motivate us students to read more good books and build a more cultural school environment,our school has launched a reading campaign.This is really a meaningful activity.Why not pick up a book now and join in the fun?Wish you a good journey in books.

　　(二) 为了有一个美好的校园环境,请你代表学生会向全校发出倡议。要求内容包括以下要点,并阐述你的理由。 1.不要乱扔垃圾,爱护花草树木; 2.不得高声喧哗; 3.循环使用资料; 4.保持教室整洁。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.注意文章的连贯性。

　　【参考范文】 Dear friends, Do you want to study in a beautiful campus?So it is our duty to make our school comfortable to study in.To complete this task,we should keep the following rules in mind.First of all,don’t litter about in our school.It’s smelly and attracts flies,you know.And we should protect our school’s environment by looking after flowers and trees around.Of course,don’t yell or shout out so that we can study in a quiet environment.It’s also suggested that we should reuse everything recyclable,which is money-saving and environmentally friendly.Finally,please keep classrooms clean,use the blackboard responsibly and remember there is no drinking or eating in the classrooms.Let’s all take action now and contribute to building a harmonious environment. Thank you! The Students’ Union March 1

　　1.Ladies and gentlemen,may I have your attention,please?I have an announcement to make.女士们,先生们,请注意。下面播报一则通知。 2.Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.欢迎各位参加这次的竞赛。 3.The Students’ Union has decided to organize a music week.学生会决定组织“音乐周”活动。 4.Please sign your name/fill in a...form.请您签上自己的姓名/填写……表格。 5.Please listen carefully and we’ll have a discussion in groups later.请认真听,之后我们会进行小组讨论。 6.Come to have the great fun!快来玩吧! 7.The place for the activities will be announced later.活动地点将稍后通知。

　　8.There’s been a change in our time schedule this week.The meeting will be put off until next week.本周我们的计划表有所变动,会议将推迟至下周。 9.Don’t forget to bring your gifts with you.不要忘了带礼物。 10.Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.请尽早确认您的参加信息。

　　(2016·宁夏大学附属中学月考)假如你是校学生会主席,高二年级将于下个月举办英语周活动,请根据以下内容写一篇英语书面通知。 时间:12月7日~11日 下午4:30~6:30。 地点:学校体育馆。 活动安排: 1.周一开幕式,周五闭幕式; 2.周二知识竞赛,周三英语演讲比赛,周四英文歌曲比赛。 特别要求:每班准备一个英语短剧,在开幕式或闭幕式上表演。请各班务必认真组织,争取把这次英语周办得丰富多彩。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 提示词:体育馆 gymnasium Notice The English Week held every two years is approaching.  

　　The Students’ Union November 28

　　【参考范文】 Notice The English Week held every two years is approaching.All the students in Grade Two are required to take part in it at 4∶30 pm every day,and it will last 5 days,from December 7th to 11th.The activities include the Opening Ceremony on Monday and the Closing Ceremony on Friday.Besides,we have Knowledge Contest,English Speech Contest and English Songs Competition in the rest of the three days as well. As for the details of the competition,please ask your English teacher.Be sure that each class should give an English drama performance and make every effort to present us an interesting and colorful English Week. The Students’ Union November 28

　　三、致辞 典例　(2016·福建莆田第二十五中学月考)外教Smith先生将来你校工作,安排任教你班的口语课,请你以英语老师的身份致欢迎辞。要点如下: 1.Smith先生来自美国; 2.他在美国也是一位老师,他的课生动有趣; 3.他将在我校工作两年; 4.起初,我们可能不能完全听懂他的课,但这种情况不会持续很久; 5.希望他在我校工作期间生活愉快、工作顺利。 注意: 1.不能逐条翻译上述要点; 2.词数100左右。

　　【参考范文】 Boys and girls, Attention,please!I’m glad to have the honor to introduce to you a guest,Mr Smith.He is a teacher from America.In the following two years,he will teach us oral English.His classes are lively and interesting.So I’m sure that you will enjoy his classes. At first,we may have some trouble in understanding him.However,as time goes on,it will get better and better.I hope you will make best use of the chance to practise your spoken English.Best wishes to Mr Smith. That’s all.Thank you.

　　一般致辞包括以下要素:称呼(Salutation),客套语(Conversational Routine),介绍情况(Body),结束语(Ending)。 1.称呼。致辞开始一般都要以Ladies and gentlemen,Boys and girls,Teachers and students,Dear friends或Welcome everybody等开始,以吸引听众注意。 2.客套语。欢迎他人时可讲:It is my special pleasure to welcome...等;开幕时可讲:Thank you for coming tonight to celebrate this happy and joyous occasion等;欢送时可讲:May you have a wonderful time等。 3.介绍情况。做好这类题目把握好提示十分重要。欢迎词必须交代清楚欢迎谁,客人的主要身份,同时把客人介绍给大家。欢送词则要说清欢送哪一位,该客人什么时候离开,客人在逗留期间进行了哪些活动等。 4.结束语。结束时一般以Thank you 致谢或表达其他祝福如:I wish you the best of luck in the New Year,I hope you will have a very enjoyable stay等。

　　1.First of all,let’s give our warm welcome to our honorable guest(s).首先,请向我们尊贵的客人致以热烈的欢迎。 2.Now let’s welcome...to give us a lecture.现在请欢迎……给我们做讲座。 3.Now let us invite...to address us.现在请欢迎……为大家讲话。 4.I would also like to take this opportunity to wish him/her a pleasant safe journey home.我也想借此机会祝他/她归途一帆风顺。 5.We wish Mr/Mrs/Miss...a pleasant journey and good health.我们祝……先生/夫人/小姐一帆风顺,身体健康。 6.We are looking forward to seeing him/her again.我们期待再次见到他/她。 7.It is my special pleasure to welcome our new member,Mr Brown,who has come here from the United States.我十分荣幸在此欢迎我们的新成员,布朗先生。他刚从美国回来。

　　8.I am very happy to see all of you here to celebrate the arrival of the New Year.我很高兴大家欢聚在此庆祝新年的到来。 9.Now in bidding farewell to...,allow me on behalf of...to express our sincere thanks once again to him/her.在此向……道别,请允许我代表……再次向他/她致以诚挚的谢意。 10.Today,we gather here to have a send-off meeting.今天,我们聚集在此召开送别会。

　　(一) 美籍教师Mr Black明天将离开你校回国。他教你们多年口语与听力,对学生既和蔼又严格;他的课讲得既生动又有趣,受到学生的欢迎。在他回国前夕,学生举行欢送会,请你代表全体同学发言,对布莱克先生表示感谢并祝他旅途愉快。 注意: 1.要点要全,但不能逐句翻译。 2.词数100左右。

　　【参考范文】 Dear friends, Now we gather here to have a send-off meeting.Our English teacher Mr Black is going to return to his home country tomorrow.On behalf of all my schoolmates here I express our sincere thanks to him.In the past few years,Mr Black has taught us spoken English and extensive listening.As is known to us all,not only is Mr Black kind and patient to us,but he is also strict with us now and then.With his help,we all have made rapid progress in English.We enjoyed his lessons very much because his method of teaching was quite different from other teachers’.The lessons he gave us were both lively and interesting.Now he will leave our school soon.We thank him very much for his wonderful work and wish him a good journey.

　　(二) Mr Alexander应邀来你校做讲座,讲解如何学习写作及中国学生学英语的情况。现由你代表学生用英语致欢迎辞。内容应包括: 1.表示欢迎; 2.介绍Mr Alexander:美国著名语言学家,著有New Concept English,Follow Me等书籍; 3.同学们提问题。 注意: 1.要点齐全,但不能逐条翻译; 2.词数100左右。 参考词汇:语言学家 linguist

　　【参考范文】 Boys and girls, We feel greatly honored to be here with Professor Alexander,a world famous linguist from America.Now allow me on behalf of all the students of our school to extend our warm welcome and sincere greetings to our distinguished guest.Mr Alexander has written lots of books,including New Concept English and Follow Me,both of which are well known to us.Today Mr Alexander is here to give us a lecture on writing and about English study in middle schools in China.If you have any question on English study,you are free to turn to him for help.Now let us invite Professor Smith to address us.

　　四、发言稿 典例　(2017·天津高考)假设你是某大学的学生李津。你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动。你欲参选。请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。 ☆ 个人优势介绍(如性格、特长等); ☆ 组织校内活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等); ☆ 组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等); ☆ 表达当选的愿望。 注意: 1.词数不少于100; 2.请勿提及真实学校名称; 3.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯; 4.开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇:副主席 vice president;竞选 run for Good afternoon,my dear friends. My name is Li Jin.      Thank you.

　　【参考范文】 Good afternoon,my dear friends. My name is Li Jin.Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club.Concerning this position,I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing,getting on well with others,and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities.If I am lucky enough to be the vice president,I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students.In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English,I intend to organize some activities such as lectures,English parties,English speech contests and so on. I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president. Thank you.

　　1.发言稿是发言者为了发表自己的意见、看法或汇报思想、工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。格式一般由称呼、正文、结束语三部分构成。 (1)称呼。常用的称呼有Dear Mr/Mrs/Miss...,Dear Sir/Madam,Ladies and gentlemen等。也可以不用称呼,直接写正文。 (2)正文。正文应该开门见山提出问题及对问题的看法,然后说明理由,最后照应开头对全文作简明扼要的总结,总结一定要简练有力,切中要点。在汇报经验、情况等的发言中,要注意对情况的叙述,介绍自己的体会或者收获等系统总结,内容完整,不遗漏要点。 (3)结束语。发言结束时,一般常用“Thank you for listening.”,“That’s all.Thank you.”,“Thanks a lot.”等表示感谢。有时发言者还在结尾时直接提出希望,向听众发出号召。

　　2.发言稿的注意事项。 (1)注意发言稿的对象。发言稿是直接面向听众的,所以发言的时候观点要鲜明,感情要真挚,能给人以可信性和可靠感,这样才能打动人,引起听众的共鸣。 (2)注意发言稿的语言。语言要直白简洁,句子要精悍有力,文字要朗朗上口,语言要节奏感强。因而发言时注意多采用简单句,语言要口语化,多用排比句,多使用重复修辞格,注意合理使用祈使句、设问句等。

　　1.I’d like to tell you something about...我想告诉你一些关于……的事。 2.Let me give you a brief introduction about...允许我给你简单地介绍…… 3.Please allow me to introduce the travel arrangement to you.请允许我向你介绍一下旅行安排。 4.Personally,I think it is a good idea for us to...就我个人而言,我认为……对我们来说是好主意。 5.Firstly,we are expected to...Secondly,...Lastly,...首先,我们需要……其次,……最后,…… 6.It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of...我很荣幸能代表……做演讲。 7.The first thing we can do is to....As we all know...What we can do next is to...For example...Besides...首先我们能做的是……众所周知……我们接下来能做的是……例如……另外……

　　(2016·河北冀州中学月考)假如你是李华,你们学校最近开展了“创建平安校园”的活动。你们班为此组织主题班会,请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈一谈你对如何创建平安校园的一些想法。短文应包括以下内容: 1.安全意识的重要性; 2.在运动中要注意安全; 3.在校内要注意人身安全; 4.同学间发生矛盾时,一定要保持冷静、理智; 5.逐步将“平安校园”活动转换为全体师生的实际行动。 注意: 1.不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节使行文连贯; 2.开头已给出,不计入总词数; 3.词数100左右。

　　参考词汇:校园安全 safety at school My dear classmates, There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life.Recently our school

　　【参考范文】 My dear classmates, There is no denying that safety plays an important part in our daily life.Recently our school has carried out a program aimed at making our campus a safe place to stay in. I consider this as indeed a good practice,which will make us aware that safety should always come first in our daily life,whether when we stay at school or outside.When we are doing sports,we should attach importance to the safety and avoid being hurt.Furthermore,when we get into trouble with our classmates,we should remain calm and avoid any form of fighting,which may only bring suffering and pain to us mentally and physically. As far as I’m concerned,I feel all the students and teachers should work hard and try to keep the “safety at school” activity in mind.Besides,we are supposed to observe the law discipline wherever we are at any moment. Thanks.

　　五、介绍事物、阐明事理 典例1　(2017·新课标全国卷Ⅱ)假定你是李华,自制一些中国结(Chinese knot)。给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括: 1.外观(尺寸、颜色、材料); 2.象征意义; 3.价格。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear Tom, How are you doing?

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】 Dear Tom, How are you doing?I wonder if you could sell some Chinese knots for me.I made them myself with red silk threads,cloth and other materials.They look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond,about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.In China,these knots stand for friendship,love and good luck.People can either give them as gifts to friends or hang them in their houses.They are only 12.99 US dollars each.If anyone wants to know more about the knots,let them write to me.Also,do let me know if you need further information.Thank you! Li Hua

　　典例2　假设你是李华,你的美国笔友Peter曾表示希望来中国教书。你校现在需招聘外教,请给他写封信,告知招聘信息。内容主要包括: 1.教授课程:英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等; 2.授课对象:高中生(至少三年英语基础); 3.工作量: ●每周12学时,任选三门课; ●担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

　　【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China.Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some courses to senior high students.If you come,you can choose three of the following four courses:Speaking,Writing,America Today and Britain Today,and teach 12 hours a week.The students who are going to take these courses have at least three years of English learning experience.Besides teaching,you will also work as an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper. Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions.I’d be more than happy to help. Yours sincerely, Li Hua

　　1.介绍事物类写作应注意以下几点: (1)时态常用一般现在时,同时常用被动语态;语言比较客观,一般用第三人称写作。 (2)说明事物必须注意表达准确,条理清晰,层次分明,语言简练和用词准确。特别注意适当使用过渡词将上下文的逻辑关系体现出来。 (3)常用的说明方法有罗列法(listing)、举例法(examples)、比较法(comparison and contrast)、定义法(definition)、顺序法(sequence of time,space and process)以及分类法(classification)等。在写作过程中要根据情况使用恰当的说明方法。 2.事理说明文的说明方法及顺序不同于事物说明文。写事理说明文要确切把握需要介绍的事情,并注意层次性,条理性与准确性。事理说明文常可采用“三段式”结构。第一段,提出文章的主题,即文章想要阐述说明的主要内容。第二段,是文章的核心部分,对文章的主题进行展开说明。最后一段,即书信的结尾段,可表达愿望等。

　　1.As for the price,it is surprisingly low.It costs only 70% of that of the same kind of other laptops.关于它的价格,现在非常低。它的花费只有其他同类电脑的70%。 2.The bag is small in size and light in weight,so you’ll feel it very convenient and easy to use.包的尺寸很小,重量很轻,因此你会发觉它用起来既方便又简单。 3.The purse enjoys a good fame for its high quality.该钱包因质量上乘享有盛誉。 4.This kind of Digital Camera is a newcomer in the camera family.这种数码相机是数码家族中的新产品。 5.It’s a small leather case with a broken handle on it,in which there are some personal belongings.这是一个带有断把的小型皮箱,里面装有一些私人物品。 6.You might as well try the following advice to do a thorough cleanup of your keyboard regularly.你也许可以尝试一下以下建议来定期全面清理你的键盘。

　　7.I hold the idea that autonomous learning should become the main stream in the future language learning.我坚持认为自主学习应当成为未来语言学习中的主流。 8.In a word/In short,English is an important language.It is necessary for us to learn and master English.简而言之,英语是一门重要的语言,我们很有必要学习并掌握英语。 9.Music,too,is another effective means of refreshing and helping us concentrate better.音乐也是一种有效的放松途径,能帮我们更好地集中精神。 10.Besides,it should be a good idea to make trips to Sichuan,because by doing so you’ll learn and remember the dialect more easily.另外,去四川旅游应当是一个好主意,因为通过这样做你能更轻松地学习和记忆方言。

　　(一)(2016·山东新泰第一中学月考) 假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom打算来北京游玩两天。请写一封邮件给他,向他介绍以下有关北京的情况,及建议在京期间两天的日程安排,并欢迎他来北京玩。 1.北京概况: 地理位置:位于华北地区,是全球拥有最多世界文化遗址的城市; 面积:16000平方公里; 人口:1300万。 2.日程安排: 第一天:游览长城、拍照并购买纪念品; 第二天:登天安门城楼俯瞰紫禁城,参观故宫博物院感受中国传统文化。 注意: 1.信件开头和结尾已写好,不计入总词数; 2.词数100左右; 3.不能使用真实的姓名和学校名称。 参考词汇:天安门城楼 Tian’anmen Gate-tower;故宫博物院 the Palace Museum Dear Tom,

　　Best wishes, Li Hua

　　第三部分 -*- 名师高效课堂 专题一　提纲作文 第三部分 -*- 名师高效课堂 专题一　提纲作文 第三部分 -*- 名师高效课堂 专题一　提纲作文 名师高效课堂 第三部分 -*- 名师高效课堂 专题一　提纲作文 第三部分　写作指导 专题突破 专题一　提纲作文 一、书信、电子邮件 典例1　(2015·新课标全国卷Ⅰ)假定你是李华,你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友Peter写信约稿,要点如下: 1.栏目介绍; 2.稿件内容; 3.稿件长度:约400词; 4.交稿日期:6月28日前。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文章开头已经写好,不计入总词数。

　　Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.

　　Yours, Li Hua

　　【参考范文】 Dear Peter, I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28? I’m looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua

　　典例2　(2015·天津高考)假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。 1.自我介绍; 2.拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等; 3.询问对方的其他需求。 注意: 1.词数不少于100; 2.请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。 参考词汇:学生会 the Students’ Union Dear Chris,

　　Yours, Li Jin

　　【参考范文】 Dear Chris, I’m Li Jin,chairman of the Students’ Union in Chenguang High School.I’m writing to tell you something about donating books to your class.To enhance communication with your school,we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.With them,you may have a better understanding of China and its culture.We’ll take the books when participating in the summer camp this July to your school. Would you please tell me something about your other requirements?We will spare no effort to meet your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship. Best wishes! Yours, Li Jin

　　英文书信、电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成: 1.信头:即写信人的地址和写信的日期。书信中要写在信纸的右上角。 2.称呼:指对收信人的称呼。写在左上角,顶格写;称呼后面的标点一般用逗号“,”。 3.正文:即信件的主体部分。写在称呼的下一行,一般由左边第五个字母处开始写起。 注意:在写回信时,正文的开头除简单的问候外,应该总结一下上封来信中提出的问题、需求等,使收信人更清楚地了解这封回信的意图。 4.结束语:指正文结尾的客套语。位置应低于正文一两行。一般从信纸的中间稍右写起,第一个字母大写,末尾用逗号。常用的结束语有Yours,Yours sincerely,Sincerely yours,Yours truly,With best regards,Best wishes等。 5.署名:即写信人的称呼。写在结束语的下面。

　　1.I am grateful to you for...我非常感谢你……

　　2.It’s kind of you to do this for me and I do appreciate it more than I can say.你为我做这件事真的是太好了,我不知道怎么表达我的感谢之情。 3.I must apologize to you for...对于……我表示非常抱歉。 4.I am pleased to invite you to attend...很高兴邀请你参加……

　　5.I am sure that you will enjoy yourself here.我敢肯定你在这里会玩得很开心。

　　6.We look forward to seeing you.我们期盼见到你。 7.I was delighted to receive your letter.很高兴收到你的来信。 8.Your letter came to me this morning.我今天早上收到你的来信。

　　9.I’m writing to ask if you can come next week.我写信问你下周是否能过来。 10.Thank you for your letter.感谢你的来信。

　　11.Please remember me to your whole family.请代我向你的家人问好。 12.Give my best regards/wishes to your mother.请代我向你母亲致以美好的祝福。 13.Wish you success.祝你成功。 14.Wish you the best of health/luck.祝你健康/好运。 15.Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible.期盼尽快收到你的来信。

　　(一)(2016·福建三明第一中学月考) 假如你是李华,你所在的学校摄影协会将于周六上午在北山公园举行主题为 “The Beauty of Nature”的活动,集合时间是上午9:00,集合地点是公园入口。受邀的外教Bob将从学校出发,由于担心他不熟悉地形,你给他寄去一张路线图并写一封信进行说明,以便他能顺利到达。 内容包括: 1.说明活动集合的时间和地点; 2.介绍从校门口到公园的路线;承诺在公园门口等他； 3.简单谈谈这次活动的意义和你的期待。 要求: 1.词数100左右; 2.根据内容,适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文章开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:摄影协会photography club;路线route;校园路Campus Road

　　Dear Bob,

　　I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic “The Beauty of Nature” in Beishan Park this Saturday.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】 Dear Bob, I am glad to inform you that our photography club is going to have an activity with the topic “The Beauty of Nature” in Beishan Park this Saturday.We will meet at the entrance of the park at 9∶00 am.Since you are not familiar with the city,let me tell you how to get to the park.After going out of our school,go along Campus Road until you come to the first traffic lights.Then turn right.Go straight along Beishan Road and after ten minutes you’ll see the park at the end of the road,and we will be waiting for you at the gate. I believe the activity is a good chance for us to get close to nature and know how to live in harmony with nature.I am sure we will have a good time. Best wishes!

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　(二)(2016·天津“五校”联考) 假设你是李华,你上周刚刚参加了你校举办的第十届英语演讲比赛,并从三十名选手中脱颖而出,荣获“十佳奖”。在准备参赛期间,你的外教Mr Craige为你提供了很多指导和帮助。现请你用英语给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括: 1.获奖情况及感受; 2.回顾准备过程; 3.感谢他的帮助; 4.邀请他来你家做客。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.文章开头已经写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:十佳奖Top Ten Prize;选手competitor

　　Dear Mr Craige, I am writing to tell you something about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in last week in our school.

　　Yours, Li Hua

　　【参考范文】 Dear Mr Craige, I am writing to tell you something about the 10th English Speaking Contest I took part in last week in our school. I got the “Top Ten Prize” out of 30 competitors,which was totally beyond my imagination.When I heard the final result I couldn’t believe my ears and jumped with joy.Thanks to your effort,I have made much more rapid progress in my spoken English.Before the contest,whenever you had free time,you would help me practice my spoken English.You communicated with me as much as possible,and corrected my pronunciation and intonation as well.What’s more,you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence.Without your help I couldn’t have achieved such a good result.I have benefited from this competition a lot.All in all,I really appreciate your help. Thank you again for your advice and kind help.I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time. Yours, Li Hua

　　二、通知 典例　(2017·辽宁高考)假定你是学生会主席李华。学校将举办一次以“校园生活·创意无限”(Innovations on Campus)为主题的创意作品展评活动。请你根据以下图示,以短文形式用英语写一份书面通知。

　　注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯; 3.开头及结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 参考词汇:校园 campus;创意作品 innovation;颁奖 prize-giving Notice An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner.

　　The Students’ Union

　　【参考范文】 Notice An exciting event “Innovations on Campus” is around the corner.Everyone of you is expected to be part of the event which encourages creative minds and gives full play to your DIY skills. Note that your innovations must be school things.Along with your wonderful innovation,you need to hand in a report,explaining how the idea occurs to you and what materials you use. All the collections will be on show from June 16 to 18 in the gym.Looking forward to the prize-giving ceremony?Sure!It’ll be held from 15∶00 to 17∶00 on June 18.So don’t miss the chance of being the winner.Your contribution will certainly make the event a huge success.For any questions,call Li Hua at 44876655. Come on,everybody!It’s your show time. The Students’ Union

　　通知是一种常用应用文体,宣布即将发生的事情及其具体内容,因而多用将来时态,其中包含的一些注意事项,一般用祈使句来强调。通知还必须具备三个要素:时间、地点和活动内容,而且这些要素必须准确无误。通知一般分为书面通知和口头通知两种,这两种通知在格式上有较大差别。 1.书面通知的常见形式有布告、海报等。它们一般张贴在布告栏或黑板上。通知的正文上方有Notice(或NOTICE)或Announcement(或ANNOUNCEMENT)为标题。书面通知的正文一般用第三人称来写。时间、地点、参加者、内容、注意事项是通知的要点,应在正文中直截了当地一一予以说明。书面通知一定要有发通知的时间及落款。

　　2.口头通知一般不用写题目,也不必有出通知的时间。由于口头通知是面对面的告知事情,所以应该有称呼和开头语,还要用结束语。称呼语:“Boys and girls”,“Ladies and gentlemen”等;开头语:“Attention,please!”,“May I have your attention,please?”,“Be quiet,please!”,其后加上“I have an announcement to make.”;结束语之前常用“Please attend it on time.”,“Do be present on time.”,“Everyone is/All are welcome/expected.”,“Don’t be late.”等。结束时可加上“That’s all.”,“Thank you!”之类的客套话。