2017届高考英语一轮复习全套课件：第3部分 写作指导 专题突破3 图表作文（北师大版）

　　【写作内容】 1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容; 2.结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因; 3.根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。 【写作要求】 1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句; 2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称; 3.不必写标题。 【评分标准】 内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

　　【参考范文】 The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack.It not only affects our everyday life,but may also threaten people’s lives.The three selections presented above are typical examples. Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem.In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways,there is still much room for improvement,because of the ever increasing number of cars these years.What’s worse,some drivers,cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules. In fact,traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order.Without them,people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos.But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society.It is the people who obey the rules that matter.It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

　　图表作文是以文字结合图表作为信息提示的一种写作形式。该题型要求考生根据提供的图表和文字提示,用英文完成书面表达任务。 要认真解读图表,切勿遗漏重要数据信息和细节提示,不必每个细节都涉及,但重要信息必须提到。图表作文一般采用的时态为一般现在时。 图表作文的结构通常为三段式。 第一段:分析图表中的数据变化反映出来的问题或趋势,简要概述图表所揭示的信息。 第二段:分析原因。 第三段:提出解决问题的办法或建议。

　　1.As/It can be seen from/in the chart/diagram/table/graph/statistics...从图表/示意图/表格/曲线图/数据中可以看出…… 2.The table shows a three times increase over that of last year.表格显示,(这)相较去年增加了三倍。 3.The number is 5 times as much as that of...数量是……的五倍。 4.It has increased by three times as compared with that of...与……相比增长了三倍。 5.A has the highest sales figure in the three departments,followed by B and C.A在三个部门中的销量最高,其次是B和C。 6.The rise lasted for two weeks and then began to level off in August.上升的势头维持了两周,随后在八月份趋于平稳。 7.It accounts for 30% of the total population.这占了总人口的30%。

　　8.The number of students has reached 500,indicating a rise of 20%,compared to last semester.学生的数量达到了500,比上学期增加了20%。 9....picked up speed at the end of this month.……在本月底增速加快。 10.The table shows the changes in the number of...over the period from...to...该表格显示了从……到……期间……数量的变化。

　　最近,你参加了高三年级组织的“你最重视哪科作业”的调查,结果见下面的饼状图。请据此写一篇短文,介绍调查结果,并根据其中两个数据谈论自己的看法。

　　注意: 1.短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数; 2.词数100左右。 Recently,a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.The results are as follows.

　　【参考范文】 Recently,a survey on homework preference has been conducted among senior three students.The results are as follows.More than half of the students,about 54%,usually put their math homework in the first place while only 7% would rank Chinese as the most important.Meanwhile,English is regarded as most significant by 18% of the participants,and the other subjects attract the attention of 21% of the students. There is a profound difference between math and Chinese.Without doubt,some students hold the view that math is most interesting and challenging,and it seems easier for us to have a sense of achievement in it.However,each subject has its unique charm and they are of the same value.Therefore,I think we should take every subject seriously and improve our studies in a balanced way.

　　二、观点对比类图表作文 典例　在英语课堂上,你喜欢你的老师授课时只用英语,还是英语、汉语兼用?某英语杂志社就此话题邀请中学生发表看法。请你围绕“How do you prefer your English classes to be taught?In English only,or in both English and Chinese?”这个问题,参考所给要点,选择一种授课形式,写一篇英语短文。 授课形式一:只用英语 优点:有助于提高听说能力…… 缺憾:不易听懂…… 结论:…… 授课形式二:英语、汉语兼用 优点:易于理解…… 缺憾:英语氛围不浓…… 结论:……

　　注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文开头已给出(不计入总词数)。 参考词汇:氛围atmosphere I prefer my English classes to be taught in

　　【参考范文1】 I prefer my English classes to be taught in English only.As we all know,a good learning environment is vital if we want to study English well.Classes taught in English provide students with such an environment.When English is the only language used in the classroom,students will have more opportunities to practise listening and speaking.Therefore,they will be able to learn more quickly. However,there are also some problems with this teaching method.As we haven’t mastered enough English words,sometimes we may find it difficult to follow the teacher.Slow learners may even lose interest in English. Practice makes perfect.To learn English well requires a lot of practice.Therefore,I like my English classes to be taught completely in English.

　　【参考范文2】 I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese.In my opinion,learning English is a step-by-step process.As middle school students,we only have a small vocabulary.If the teacher can use some Chinese in an English class,we will understand the lesson better. Of course,an English class taught in two languages has its shortcomings.Such a class cannot create a good atmosphere for English learning.Some students will speak Chinese all the time and cannot learn English well. If you want to learn a lesson well,you have to understand it first.To help students understand the lesson better,the teacher should use Chinese from time to time.Therefore,I like my teacher to use both English and Chinese in teaching.

　　观点对比类作文的体裁为议论文。议论文是以说理为主要表达方式,对某个问题、某种现象或某个事件进行分析、评论,从而剖析事物、论述事理、发表见解、提出主张的文体。资讯报刊中的评论、杂文或对日常生活中某种现象的讨论等,都属于议论文的范畴。议论文的写作需要注意以下几点。 1.议论文中的时态较为统一,多用现在时;人称多为第一、三人称。 2. 试题多为半开放性的试题，考生既可选择支持或反对某观点，也可客观分析评论某观点。 3.正确表达语言。行文时语言表达要客观、准确、言简意赅,同时要让读者接受自己的观点,态度要诚恳、友好,因此在词语表达上也应该注意用委婉的语气。议论文重在说理,以理服人。 4.上下文逻辑要严密。行文时层次要清楚,多使用有辩论、推理等含义的连接词和过渡词等词语结构把所有事实、原因、理由紧密地同结论联系起来。

　　1.From what has been discussed above,we may finally draw the conclusion that...从以上讨论的结果我们最终可以得出……结论。 2.Which would you prefer if you are faced with the choice between...如果你面临……和……的抉择,你会倾向于哪一个? 3.As far as I am concerned,I hold the point of view that...就我个人而言,我认为…… 4.As a matter of fact,there are some other reasons to explain my choice.事实上,我做出这个选择有很多其他原因。 5.In my opinion,I never think this reason can be the point.我认为这个原因一点都不重要。 6.But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.但众所周知,大家对于这个热点话题看法不一。

　　(2016·贵州遵义航天高级中学模拟)随着电子商务的发展,网络购物正日益成为青年人生活的一部分。China Daily的社会生活栏目版展开了关于网络购物的激烈讨论。请你写一封信,谈谈网络购物的利弊以及你的看法。

　　注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。 Dear editor, With the fast development of e-commerce,online shopping is increasingly becoming an unavoidable part of the young’s life.

　　Yours, Li Hua

　　【参考范文】 Dear editor, With the fast development of e-commerce,online shopping is increasingly becoming an unavoidable part of the young’s life. That the online shopping becomes so popular with the young definitely has its own reasons.First and foremost,online shopping usually means something you buy both cheap in price and better in quality.Besides,goods you get online come to you fast as well as conveniently,saving your tiredness of shopping and walking.But the other side of the coin is also true.Goods bought online are not as fine as that from the store which you can watch,feel and smell by yourself.Some online shoppers become impatient or even unreasonable after you have paid for the goods. In my opinion,the government should enhance the e-commerce laws to regulate the activities of online purchase.Meanwhile,as the online customers,we should be cautious while shopping online. Yours, Li Hua