2016年高考英语二轮复习专题讲练测：（测）专题09 短文改错（解析版）

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　　1.【】ordinary family, Pitt showed her interest in filming at an early age. After he leaves high school, he went to university to study law. Because he loved filming more than law, shortly after he was going to graduate, he dropped out to beginning a new life. With only 325 dollars in hand, he worked sometimes as a porter or a waiter. Pitt made his firstly appearance in a film in 1990. He cared less about good roles than money. After reading a screenplay of Legends of the Fall, he attracted by the role. He asked for lower pay and was willing to work in hard condition in the film, that turned out to be a big success.

　　【答案】

　　71.her→his

　　72.leaves→left

　　73.after→before

　　74.beginning→begin

　　75.firstly→first

　　76.less→more

　　77.a→the

　　78.加was

　　79.condition→conditions

　　80.that→which

　　73.after→before根据句意因为比起法律他更喜欢电影，在他快毕业之前他辍学了。根据he was going to graduate和dropped out提示可知是在他快毕业之前，故改为before。

　　74.beginning→begin动词不定式to do表示目的，根据句意他辍学去开始新生活，表目的，故改为begin。

　　75.firstly→first形容词修饰名词，first修饰appearance，故改为first。

　　76.less→more根据下文He asked for lower pay and was willing to work in hard condition in the film可知比起钱他更在意角色，故改为more。

　　77.a→the此处为特指screenplay of Legends of the Fall，故改为the。

　　78.加was此处为被动语态，他被角色吸引，根据by the role提示，故加was。

　　79.condition→conditions此处condition为可数名词，前没有冠词限制，所以应用复数，故改为conditions。

　　80.that→which此处which作关系代词引导非限定性定语从句，故改为which。

　　2.【】If you admitted to an university in China, regardless by whatever you choose as your major, there's one compulsory course that you can not avoid it: English. The fact is what you can probably miss attending English classes when other course are taught, but you'd better take English serious. Failing in the national College English Test, you may not be able to secure you Bachelor's degree, even if you have your own major doing well. Each student learn a foreign language, mostly English, from Day One of their compulsory education. Such policy has been in place since the nation's reform and opening up in the early 1980s.

　　【答案】

　　51.在admitted 前加 are

　　52.an 改成 a

　　53.by改成of

　　54.删除it

　　55.what改成that

　　56.courses复数

　　57.serious改成seriously

　　58.you改成your

　　59.doing改成done

　　60.learn改成learns

　　59.doing改成done；考查固定搭配。have sth done让…被做，请别人做某事。

　　60.learn改成learns；原句主语为each student是单数，所以动词learn为单三式learns.

　　3.【】This summer I visited Yandangshan. When arriving by bus, I caught a sight of many mountains by looking through the mist, one of what was just like a sleeping baby from an angle. Later it looked like a strong man seeing from another.

　　What impressed me was the sunrise. Stood on the top of the mountain, I saw the sunshine giving out all directions. The green mountain in our eyes, the clouds in the sky, and the shocking expressions on people's faces formed a beautiful picture. As for me, nature hold me totally with its power.

　　The sceneries there made a great impression to me. I hope to go there again one day.

　　【答案】

　　71. 去掉sight 前的a

　　72. what→ which

　　73. seeing →seen

　　74. Stood →Standing

　　75. all前加 in

　　76. our →my

　　77. shocking →shocked

　　78. hold → held

　　79. sceneries →scenery

　　80. impression后的to改为on

　　4.【】Dear schoolmates,

　　In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve our sense to protect the environment, and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest. A contest starts on October 14th and end on 31st.Remember, you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper, that is very popular among high school student. The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline.

　　Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time.

　　Students' Union

　　【答案】

　　1.attachingattach

　　2.第二行and去掉

　　3.interestingly改为interesting

　　4.A改为The

　　5.end后面加s

　　6.that改为which

　　7.student后面加8.must 后面加be

　　9.after改为before 

　　10.最后一句话中them改为it

　　5.【】I’d like tell you something about your life in this boarding school. I stay in a dormitory with three other girls, all of them are kind and nice. We get on well to others and have become good friends. Living in a boarding school make me independent. I am confidence to take care of myself, wash the clothes, and clean the rooms, which I never did when at home. The classes here are very interesting and challenged. I’m still feeling a little dissatisfied with some other thing. The living conditions are not as good as it at home and the chance to get in touch with the outside world is limited. Anyway, I’ll get used to living here and hope the everything will be better soon.

　　【答案】

　　1. like后加to

　　2. your改为my

　　3. them改为whom

　　4. to改为with

　　5. make改为makes

　　6. confidence改为confident

　　7. challenged改为challenging

　　8. thing改为things

　　9. it改为those

　　10. 去掉hope后的the