2016年高考英语二轮复习专题讲练测：（测）专题10 书面表达（解析版）

　　班级

　　姓名

　　学号

　　分数

　　（测试时间：分钟）

　　1.【】第二节

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　假定你是李华，最近，你校的英语俱乐部正在招募一名英语角的组织者，你有意申请该职位，请你根据所给的提示写一封申请信：

　　1．介绍自己具备的优势；2．申请成功后，你打算怎么做。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右：

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：

　　3．开头语已为你写好，不计人总词数。

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　My name is Li Hua.____________________________________________________

　　Looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考答案】

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　My name is L/ Hua. I've learned that an organizer for the English Corner is wanted by the English Club. I'm writing to apply for the position.

　　I am good at spoken English. I took part in the English Speech Contest last year and won first prize. Besides, I am outgoing and energetic, so it is easy for me to make new friends. I believe I am the right person for the position.

　　If I'm chosen, I'll offer my best service. I'll choose some interesting topics for the members to talk about freely. In addition, we can learn to sing English songs, perform English plays and hold some debates regularly.

　　Looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】【亮点说明】apply for申请；be good at 擅长；take part in 参加；look forward to 盼望；I believe I am the right person for the position这个句子运用到宾语从句；If I'm chosen, I'll offer my best service这个句子运用到if引导的条件状语从句；

　　考点： 提纲类作文

　　2.【湖北省黄冈市2016届高三3月质量检测】

　　第二节 书面表达（满分 25 分）

　　假定你是李华,最近你在当地报纸上看到一则游泳培训班的广告,称其有称职教练( instructor)，一周包会。你会一点游泳,但水性不太好,想在暑假参加训练.请你写一封咨询信了解相关情况,要点如下：

　　1. 训练的具体时间和地点。

　　2. 条件和费用。

　　3. 其他特别注意的事项。

　　注意

　　1.词数 100 左右。

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　I have read your advertisement in the newspaper.

　　I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Your s sincerely ,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考答案】

　　Dear Sir/Madam,

　　I have read your advertisement in the newspaper. You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.

　　I can swim a little but I’m not very confident in the water. So I’m interested in taking part in the training course. Fortunately, the summer holiday is around the corner. I’m writing to inquire when and where the course will be given, and how long the training course will last each day. I also want to know how much you will charge me for that. Besides, would you be so kind as to tell me whether there is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary?

　　I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　【名师点睛】

　　范文结构合理，时态人称使用准确。复杂句式使用较多，如长难句You mentioned in it that your instructors are fully qualified and you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after one week’s training.句中有in that引导的原因状语从句，有that引导的宾语从句。有that引导的定语从句....... is anything special that should be prepared or does your company provide everything necessary?同时文章中的串联词使用很合适，如besides等。

　　考点：

　　3.【】第二节

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　假如你是李华，你在3月5号到8号期间入住了一家酒店。现对在此期间所遇到的问题向该酒店有关人员进行投诉，其中主要包括房间照明，食物以及员工的服务态度等方面。

　　注意：1、词数100字左右

　　2、信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数

　　3、可适当增加情节，使文章流畅

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　Faithfully yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【参考答案】

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I was a visitor in your hotel for three days during Mar 5 to Mar 8. I am sorry I have to say I was greatly disappointed with the inconvenient service you provided.

　　First of all, it is the lighting facilities in the room. One of the lights is broken and another is so dark. Another unpleasant factor of your hotel is the food quality. The steak I ordered is sour. The last but not the least short coming of your hotel is the cold and indifferent service of the waiters. 1 asked one of them to bring newspaper to my room, but no paper was delivered at last.

　　I am sure that you will agree with me on the point that your service is unacceptable. I trust that you will take immediate steps to improve the situation and I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Faithfully yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【名师点睛】

　　范文分为三段介绍要点，结构合理，层次分明。语言凝练恰当，包含要求所有要点。同时也有适当发挥，如介绍宾馆食物糟糕时，添加了The steak I ordered is sour.在第二段中介绍宾馆存在问题时，使用了连接成分first of all，last but not least等；同时文章中也使用了较多的高级词汇，如inconvenient，facility，indifferent等；另外文章中高级句式运用并不多，如同位语从句I am sure that you will agree with me on the point that your service is unacceptable.可知适当添加倒装句或强调句型来提升文章的内涵。

　　考点：考查半开放性作文

　　.【】第五节 书面表达(满分25分)

　　据报道， 在我国仍有很多山区的孩子因为家庭贫穷而上不起学，你们班就如何帮助这些孩子上学进行了讨论。假如你是李华，请你把你们的建议写成一封信寄给Teens,希望他们能够呼吁更多的人参与这项活动。

　　建议要点：

　　1.收集旧课本和衣服

　　2.呼吁更多人帮助他们

　　3.你的建议,至少一条

　　要求：1.100词左右 2.可适当增加细节，以便行文连贯。

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m a senior high school student.We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　LiHua

　　【参考答案】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’m a senior high school student. It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school because of poverty. Last week, our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood.

　　Here are our suggestions. First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them. Second, it’s also very important to appeal to more people and social organizations to help and care for those poor children. As far as I’m concerned, we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need. Above all, we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.

　　We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly, increase public awareness of the poor children’s living conditions and call on more people to help them.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点说明】It’s reported that in China many children in mountainous areas still can’t go to school because of poverty.主语从句的运用；our class held a discussion about how to help them to go to school and live a happy childhood.疑问词家动词不定式在句中巧妙运用；First, some old textbooks and clothes can be collected and sent to those children so that they can be reused by them.结果状语从句和含情态动词的被动语态完美结合；As far as I’m concerned, we should save some of our pocket money and give it to those children in need.句中使用了As far as I’m concerned，引导的状语从句；we should give them respect, never looking down upon them because they are poor.现在分词作状语和原因状语从句同时出现在一句中；We’ll really appreciate it if you can, through the English Weekly,固定句式在句中运用恰到好处。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文