2016届高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训（10）

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十）

　　【专项突破】短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1This term our school has offer more than ten optional courses with which students can choose. The courses are given from 4:00 to 5:30 every Thursday afternoon. Students show interest in optional courses. Their favourite are computers, speaking English, arts and so on . They say they have learned a lot about that is not taught in text books and they have got a great deal of practice. Therefore, students are not quite satisfied. They hope that more optional courses will be offered or the homework will be less. They suggest more trips and visits should organized so that they can learn more about what's going on inside school.

　　Passage 2

　　As we all know it(删掉), many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. That’s why(because) their parents don’t want him(them) to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping(equipped) with as many skills as possible. Therefore they won’t lose face when comparing their children with others’. Beside(Besides), they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing(stand) out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was(is) unwise to force children to do that(what) they don’t like. Too many training classes will be(a) heavy burden for children. Parents shouldn’t push their children too hardly(hard).

　　Passage 3

　　Dear Mr. Johnson,

　　I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.  Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time ,I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Passage 4

　　It's reported that many people died of traffic accidents each year. Road safety has aroused the widely attention of the public. Many rules have made to reduce the traffic crashes, especially for the ones involved in the pedestrians. In my opinion, we should make road safety seriously in our daily life. While used the road, we must walk on the pavement and learn to protect us. Besides, car drivers should obey the traffic rules, that is both good for themselves and others.

　　In the word, obeying the traffic rules are what all of us should pay attention to particularly. After all, life is not a small matter.

　　Passage 5

　　Dear Sally,

　　Now I’d like to tell you something about my part-time job this summer vacation, of which I worked like a guide in a travel agency. The work was interesting but tired. I think it was helpful to work this holiday. It was the first time that I have earned money on my own. I’ve come to understand how hard my parents work to support for the family. I used to keep on ask them for money, but now I’ll never waste money and learn to share worry with my parent. I've learnt how to get along well with others. What's worse, I've gained some working and social experience and I have learnt something can’t be learnt from textbooks. All these will be good for my future. In the word, I had the wonderful and valuable summer vacation.

　　Yours,

　　Passage 6

　　We interrupt this program to bring you some special news. This afternoon, a truck run into the back of a school bus that it left Central Junior High School at 3 p.m. Badly hurting, ten students and the truck driver were sent to hospital shortly before the accident. Luckily, there was no death. A police came and said that the truck driver and the bus driver weren’t drunk, nor could poor weather used to explain the accident. We are still going into the reasons.

　　This is the seven traffic accident in the city this month. Please be more carefully in driving. More information about the accident will be reported at the five o’clock news report. Now we return you to the music show.

　　Passage 7

　　We participated a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the Culture Square, passing leaflets to passer-by from which they can learn what an earthquake is and how to protect them against the earthquake. The leaflets(传单) drew an attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake could cause and told them to take action in a right and efficiently way. Some made a public speech, tell people about the best place which they can hide when an earthquake occurs.

　　We have been learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation so we thought everyone should be concerned about each other and took responsibility for promoting a public cause.

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十）答案

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　　Passage 2

　　As we all know it(删掉), many children have to spend their weekends and holidays attending various training courses though they are unwilling to. That’s why(because) their parents don’t want him(them) to fall behind at the starting line. Instead, they hope their children are equipping(equipped) with as many skills as possible. Therefore they won’t lose face when comparing their children with others’. Beside(Besides), they are sure these extra classes will help their children standing(stand) out and become more competitive in the future. Actually, it was(is) unwise to force children to do that(what) they don’t like. Too many training classes will be(a) heavy burden for children. Parents shouldn’t push their children too hardly(hard).

　　Passage 3

　　Dear Mr. Johnson,

　　I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I

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　　am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I

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　　famous and I’ll ^ very glad if you let me work for be it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．

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　　Passage 4

　　1.died改为die

　　2.widely改为wide

　　3.have后加been

　　4.去掉for

　　5.make改为take

　　6.used 改为using

　　7.us改为ourselves

　　8.that改为which

　　9.the改为a

　　10.are改为is

　　Passage 5

　　1.of改为for

　　2.like 改为as

　　3.tired改为tiring

　　4.have改为had

　　5.For去掉

　　6.ask改为asking

　　7.parent改为parents

　　8.worse改为more

　　9.something改为that

　　10.the改为a

　　Passage 6

　　51. run→ ran

　　52. that 后it 去掉

　　53. hurting→hurt

　　54. before → after

　　55. A police→ The police

　　56. weather 后加be

　　57. We are→They are

　　58. seven→seventh

　　59.carefully→careful

　　60. at

　　→ in

　　We participated in a voluntary activity organized by our school last Sunday. We gathered at the Culture square, passing leaflets to passers-by from which they can learn what an earthquake is and how to protect themselves against the earthquake. The leaflets drew the attention of the public to the damage that an earthquake can cause and told them to take action in a right and efficient way. Some made a public speech, telling people about the best place where they can hide when an earthquake occurs.

　　We have learned much from the voluntary activity, which offers us an opportunity to contribute to society. We told the public about the situation because we thought everyone should be concerned about each other and take responsibility for promoting a public cause.