2016届高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训（13）

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十三）

　　【专项突破】短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1

　　In the countryside there are some children dropped out of school. The reasons of this are different. Some families are very poor to afford the education of their children. Some parents think useless for girls to attend school, so that their daughters lost the chance. Some children are unwilling to attend school for lack of interests in their studies. In my opinion, every child should have the chance to receive an education, whether boys and girls. Besides, the government should take effect measures to guarantee children’s right of education because we will play important roles in developing our country in the future.

　　Passage 2

　　One day during the period of the Three Kingdoms (220- 265A.D.), Cao Cao led his soldiers to fight battle. On his way his soldiers were all feeling thirst, but there was no water near. Cao Cao got worried in his heart, as suddenly an idea occurred in his mind.

　　Then he let his order be past down:“There have plum trees ahead, and the plums in the trees are sweets and sour. We’ll get there in no time, and then you’ll be picking and eating it.” When the soldiers all had heard the command, they soon felt their mouths water.

　　Passage 3

　　Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of over 100 years old along a road. Whether the temple should pulled down have caused a heated discussion.

　　Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps improve the image of our city. But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one solution. How should we pull it down? The temple has a long history and tells us something of our city. We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.

　　So far there had been no conclusion over the matter.

　　Passage 4

　　There are many people think that wealth is better than health. I used to think so until one day I had read a story about Howard Joyce.He was an European billionaire who got everything he wanted.Therefore，in the last twenty years of his life, his health began to get worse and he led a miserably life.Although the best doctors called for him, he could still find no relief.I have realized that health is worth all the money in the world.If you have million of dollars but you are at poor health, you will not be able to do what you want to do.But I would like to advise you not to hurt yourself trying to make money. Instead, take care of your body and be happy with which you do.Health is more important.

　　Passage 5

　　2015 Spring Festival is coming now. I plan buy something for my parents. What I want to give them back is a VIP card for a health club but they need enough exercise. My father works hardly as a teacher, spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often buried herself in her books. Therefore, all of them should exercise more from now on.

　　I want to give them this card to express my thank and love. I hope that they will be able to get relaxing in the health club and make more friends there. At the same time, I hope that they can take care with their health.

　　Passage 6

　　Now I’d like to sharing with you a strange experience I had a month ago. It may sound funny, and it is true. After a day’s hard work I went to bed early than usual. It was about two o’clock and suddenly I woke up. I heard a noise. I got out bed and went slowly downstairs. There had light in the living room. I listened careful. I could hear two men talking quietly. I thought two thieves have broken into my house. I was so frightening that I went back upstairs and phoned the police. They were arrived quickly and opened the door. It turned out that I forgot to turn my TV on.

　　Passage 7

　　Ladies and gentlemen,

　　Welcome to our English Corner. This Corner was set up three years before. Every Sunday morning, students from different schools and some foreigners often took part. Gather around here, we practise spoken English by talking about everything we are interested. We also exchange my experience in English study. We all have a good time here. Thousand of people have been here when it was set up.

　　We think that they have learned a lot by taking part in activity here. It is a really supplement to our English class and it is welcome by students, their parents and teachers. They all think it is of helpful. If you want to know much about the corner, you may talk to the students here.

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十三）答案

　　Passage 1

　　51. dropped →dropping52. of this →for this

　　53. very→ too

　　54. think∧it

　　55. lost→lose

　　56. interests→interest

　　57. 去掉 an

　　58. and→or

　　59. effect - effective

　　60. we → they

　　Passage 2

　　1.^a

　　battle

　　2 thirst- thirsty

　　3 near- nearby

　　4 as- when

　　5 past- passed

　　6 have- are

　　7 in- on

　　8 it- them

　　9 had去掉 10. water- watering

　　Passage 3

　　Recently our local government has decided to broaden a narrow road and there is a temple of

　　over 100 years old along a road. Whether the temple should

　　pulled down have caused a heated

　　the / this

　　be

　　has

　　discussion. Some agree that we should pull it down to carrying out the construction project

　　carry

　　because it can solve some traffic problem and make our life convenient. Beside, it helps improve

　　problems

　　Besides

　　the image of our city. But the people who are for the idea believe that we can have another one

　　against

　　solution. How should we pull it down? The temple has a long history and tells us something of our

　　Why

　　city. We can move it away and keep it as long as we like.

　　So far there had been no conclusion over the matter.

　　has

　　Passage 4

　　1.people后加who或者think改为thinking

　　2.had去掉

　　3.an改为a

　　4.Therefor改为Howver

　　5.miserably改为miserable

　　6.doctors后加were

　　7.million改为millions

　　8.at改为in

　　9.But改为So

　　10.which改为what

　　Passage 5

　　2015 Spring festival is coming now. I plan① buy something for my parents. What I want to give them ②back is a VIP card for a health club ③but they need enough exercise. My father works ④hardly as a teacher, ⑤spent most of his time at school. My mother loves reading and often ⑥buried herself in her books. Therefore, ⑦all of them should exercise more from now on.

　　I want to give them this card to express my ⑧thank and love . I hope that they will be able to get ⑨relaxing in the health club and make more friends there. At the same time, I hope that they can take care ⑩with their health

　　①buy→ to buy

　　②去掉back

　　③but → since / because

　　④hardly → hard

　　⑤spent → spending

　　⑥buried → buries

　　⑦all → both

　　⑧thank → thanks

　　⑨relaxing → relaxed

　　⑩with→ of

　　Passage 6

　　1.sharing改为share

　　2.and改为but

　　3.early改为earlier

　　4.out 后加of

　　5.had改为was

　　6.caeful改为carefully

　　7.have改为had

　　8.frightening改为frightened

　　9.were去掉

　　10.on改为off

　　Passage 7

　　before---ago

　　2. took---take

　　3. Gathering

　　4. interest后加in

　　5. my---our

　　6.when--since

　　7. activities

　　8. really--real

　　9. of去掉或者helpful--help 10. Much---more